Poems Not For The Masses- The Dark Poetry calls you.
Comments by Anth
"a shame that what comes from such neglect and horror is such imagination and poetry, its those moments when it becomes so harsh that you shut the world out and create your own, its the only way to survive, makes me wonder if i should be thankful to be able to read. i wonder if we could write the same had we not had all those dark hours of shutting out the world and relying on our imaginations, its something most arent forced into, and everytime you write you relive it again just to be able to share the beauty you found." Posted on "why we make believe" by wonderland hysteria
"enjoyed reading this so much, it had everything i love about your work and i felt thankful that i can read such words, i wish i could leave a more elegant comment but i think you aleady know how i feel about your poetry and this poem was another etched in my imagiantion that i will think of often" Posted on "the strangled silver light of morning" by wonderland hysteria
"i think many will relate to this, but have never been able to find the words, eight years and still the impact is there, glad that you could at least share with us the beauty that tried to elude you" Posted on "for eight years in waiting" by verablue
"truly nihilistic, like french existentialism reduced to its singularity, but betrayed by the fact that you negate it, its exactly how i imagine the universe came to be." Posted on "Nothing" by BerkanaSundae
"what makes this so epic is the marriage of the poem and the title, conjures up so much in my mind beyond the brilliance you already protrayed" Posted on "Musings of a Martyr" by BerkanaSundae
"i love the title, its exactly what these moments are, and they couldn't be worded more perfectly, i just wish i could explain better why i love your poetry so much" Posted on "sparks" by Railway_Butterfly
"good to see new work from you, I liked how this poem ran full circle, a sweeping journey, the leaves blew in like a songs intro and swept up to a crescendo before settling into a subtle ending" Posted on "Winter Pine." by TheProphetUntold
"I suppose the good thing is that jay z might bring new fans to u2, maybe that's the reasoning, I don't like either but hope you enjoy it" Posted on "A Hundred Highways..." by jonLyndon
"do you write the poems with the dp notepad?..you should write on your computer and then copy and paste into dp as, if your internet connection is lost, or you press backspace by accident; you could lose your work, i use msword with autosave set to every five mins, you could download openoffice.org if you dont have msword as its just as good- id hate to think that your words could become lost" Posted on "A Hundred Highways..." by jonLyndon
"wonderful write, I truly enjoyed reading it, so many subtly clever moments that just seem to come so natural to you, it makes us stop and think of it were as you might of rolled it off like jazz, at the same time some parts feel so well thought out for maximum effect and superior placement that it belies the rate at which you post, i especially liked how the hotels, highways changes dwindled back down to its simplest at the end.. apart from the guttural technicality though this was both calming and joyful to read " Posted on "A Hundred Highways..." by jonLyndon
"it is a joy to be swept up in the tender whirlwinds of your words, they fall down the page and beg to be taken in slowly and assuredly, whispered or read in hushed tones, you create verses that have a magic to them that unrhyming poetry would not have, yet you retain the smoothness of prose at the same time, it isnt easy but you pull it off in a way that seems easy to you, i can only appluad and look forward to reading more of your work" Posted on "...between green and indigo..." by kinkifrog
""rouge red ballet skirt balmy as a hurricane" is my favourite line in this, it reminds me of the quizical nature of alice, as an adult, asking the world to honour her swelling imagination and finding it both lacking and yet endlessly beautiful." Posted on "buttons for eyes" by wonderland hysteria
"enraptured always by your works, im thankful that you share because there is no one else who conjures up such unravelling childhood imaginations to me" Posted on "because the moon is a lie." by wonderland hysteria
"I would love to exist in one of your poems, i think the scenes you create are more epic and full of longing and darkly adventurous romance than any film i have ever seen" Posted on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
"sublime work, ive missed that feeling your works inspire, im reminded of no wings - (flash to;) your poetry runs through fields with a torn dress and kisses in the rain(flash to;) wonderfully thought out structure that just mesmerises because it is so integral to the feeling your words give, this is a poem to read until it is remembered off by heart, and i will do" Posted on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
"I have been reading this over and over for the last few days, It is as much like listening to music as reading a poem in the rhythms and atmosphere it has, elegant, calming, lyrical, clever and transient, one of my favourite poems in quite a while" Posted on "Self Portrait in A Poem" by jonLyndon
"great write here man, the gaps between byour works are longer at moment but the precision is still there, to get straight to teh point and create a scene with just the right words for full effect that the reader has to do less work to become emerged in your words, i can only mention that it was a pleasure to read, like the uplifting emotional moment at the climax of a ten minute instrumental" Posted on "div.ision" by Six-Out
"i read this when it was first posted and remember thinking, how fortunate i was to be able to read such a great poem that morning but that i didnt know how to comment, so i left it silent and thankful and just thought that i should comment as i came back to read this today and loved it just as much" Posted on "with black on gray" by Six-Out
"your imagery is like frostbite, i can almost sense your fingers shaking as you write, frozen to delicacy, such harsh beauty, what you put into your writing always floors me" Posted on "mercury snow.flurries" by sIo
"this is my favourite work of art in a long time. i dont like to say youve outdone yourself/that isnt right-more youve accomplished a new brilliance that is part of your whole wonderland hysteria and that this one in particular is deeply resonant with me, evoking and fascianting and truly something special." Posted on "Of dreams and like things." by wonderland hysteria
"what i love most is how, instead of like, reading a poem with obvious subjeect matter, they sometimes dont give you chance to let your mind wander off, this made me think of so many differnt things and its what i try to do with my own works, its more like looking at a painting than reading words, theres so much freedom and feeling in your poetry that i recall many childhood wonders and dreams whilst reading you and i cant ask for more than that from art" Posted on "regurgitated firefly birth" by AniDayz
"its so exciting when you posst, i love your style and how the natural flow and subconscious tream allows for some of the most clever and fadcinating imagery and turns of phrase, yet it all amounts to the same whole, never losing its focus no matter how many directions it goes in, like a kite on a string, i enjoyed reading this so much and always will do" Posted on "regurgitated firefly birth" by AniDayz
"part of me feels like ive been missing things like this, like i dont know where to find them, other than in your talent, a very cool work which i loved" Posted on "Con Man" by Lolita
"ive been reading this over and over and its like, i think to myself, only you could think of and write a poem like this, ive always always been fascinated by your works and loved them for all that they represent, not many poems that make me smile,and in someway, proud and glad for you for pulling it off everytime, like a velveteen rabbit from a hat" Posted on "in between the cracks before dawn" by wonderland hysteria
"my last comment didnt really explain how i felt about this poem, its just that ive kept coming back to..feel it, as personal to you as it is, im glad you could share this" Posted on "if you want to know where to find me" by Anna Helianthus
