Poems Not For The Masses- The Dark Poetry calls you.
Comments by Ladyhawke
".....I am terrified to ask. What's happened? I've been away. " Posted on "Jadie Baby" by Morgaine
"Makes two of us.... I'm sorry you can't follow your dreams. But hey... there's a reason you're staying here. Just don't know what it is yet. You'll find out someday. Until then, keep ya chin up. You're tough, you can do it. *wink*" Posted on "Lost Love" by DeafSoldier
"I had a really close friend go to the army last year. He came back a month ago. I never cried so hard as when he left. I was lucky that time. About the same time said friend left, about a month later, another friend of mine left. It's been 11 months. No word.... This was close to home for me. " Posted on "Lost Love" by DeafSoldier
"I have a grandfather who was in WW2, so the world wars have always been a source of interest to me. This was tragically beautiful. The sorrow.... My head is bowed to you sir. I am left in silence for these words...." Posted on "Memoir of a WWI Soldier" by DeafSoldier
""Free-floating". Excellent description. Couldn't have said it better. This was gorgeous. Pure ecstasy. I was lost in the euphoria, the labyrinth of words you have weaved into this polished, refined piece of art. Bravo!" Posted on "Hummingbird Feather" by metaphormachine
"Reminds me of the random, yet exactly precise movements of a brushstroke by an artist. Well done, indeed." Posted on "Clouds Wisdom" by metaphormachine
"Love is the deadliest poison. Not because it kills..... but because it makes us want to live. Again, your style of simplicity makes your words have a meaning that sits deep within them. I like it. " Posted on "Passion" by metaphormachine
"Graffiti- Leaving your mark on the world, letting them know you had a voice, and you mean to be heard. This speaks to me, the simplicity of it is beautiful. Bravo!" Posted on "Graffiti" by metaphormachine
""...and how the sorrow I still feel this very moment is the most beautiful thing I've ever felt." Jesus. What an amazing line. I really loved this. The feeling-- the emotion just flowing through this piece, it's enough to bring you to your knees. This was an excellent piece, I can't stress that enough. Brava!" Posted on "Beautiful." by IAmNorge
"Well these green eyes loved to feast themselves upon this masterpiece. Indeed, this was an immense pleasure to read. The language and wording you used was immaculate. Perfect flow and rhythm. Kudos to you, young sir, for writing such a beauty." Posted on "The Devil with the Green Eyes" by IAmNorge
"This kind of love, IS the deepest, isn't it?" Posted on "Goth girl " by jordyray
"I really love the honesty in this. You say you hide.... but all I see brutal honesty, facing the world. It hurts, yeah. But I see someone who's braved the hurt. Again, very honest piece. I feel for you. " Posted on "I'm Not Bulletproof" by PunkKat1
"I do the same. Writing is a form of release sometimes. To vent anger, frustration, depression, love and happiness. It's good you found your form of release. And these questions, I've asked myself many a time as well. Still do. " Posted on "Questions and Feelings Hidden Inside" by PunkKat1
"Agreed. You can really feel the emotion in this. This means a lot. Makes the words..... heavier. It hit the reader harder and closer. This was excellent." Posted on "Melancholy" by PunkKat1
"This sounds something similar to what I just went through. Truly gorgeous wording Darun. So sensual. Such silky mental bliss. Beautiful. Can't say anymore than what's already been said by others." Posted on "in.dreams" by SilentStalker
"Oh my, *chills*. This was beautifully dark and haunting. That's the word. Haunting. Excellent John. Another excellently written piece. So glad to see you posting again. Missed you. " Posted on "Nightmares" by johnbevan17
"I am so sorry. I can feel this pain, because my grandpa died too when I was 3 or 4. It's a void in my life I feel every day. You translated the pain, the emotional suffering so well in this. Again, I am sorry about your grandpa. " Posted on "Too Young " by kendra
"This meant more to me than I anticipated it would. I was caught off guard by this. I... I don't know what else to say. Excuse the speechlessness. I really truly did feel every word of this. I..... this was heartbreaking. Amazing delivery. Bravo, my friend. " Posted on "Willow breaks" by Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3
"This..... is beauty. I was overtaken by this piece. Overtaken with nostalgia, sadness, intrigue and a sense of pure raw beauty. The 5th stanza really was phenomenal. This whole piece, a work of art. Brava!! Thank you so much for sharing. It was beautiful." Posted on "I Remember" by disc
"You do have an exquisite way with words. I don't want to repeat the very words of the past commentor, but this was so intriguing. It was perplexing, but full of passion, almost. I can't really say any more. I don't have the words. " Posted on "Europe" by Eurypteres
"Absolutely enchanting. I was astounded by this Jon. Really. I am blown away. Such beauty. Such poignant tenderness and fragility. The words, they have a strength, a power, but yet such..... grace. This is truly one of the best pieces I have ever read. My dear friend, you have a beautiful way with words. But then.... you always did. I do miss you around here. For the very reason your words do this to me. Leave me in awe. Literally. This was beautiful to the point of tears. I cannot express how much I am in love with this. Brava Jon!" Posted on "Gaia's Home" by Morgoth
"I agree with Sin that there's a longing, a deep passionate care and affection written in these words. It gives this piece a soul. It breathes. Breathes passion, ecstasy, want and pleasure. This was definitely a pleasure to read. Welcome to DarkPoetry. We're glad to have you:)" Posted on "Kiss" by DavidVale
"A plethora of answers, or questions unanswered. A place we all seem to be lost in. At one point in our lives. This was enlightening. Yet cryptic. But then... you always were. *tips hat*" Posted on "Splitting Decisions" by Chaos God
"The prayers for peace and the notions of a world better than the one we currently live in are hopes we all NEED to keep alive. We must. It is the very fiber of our beings. The pleas for peace in this poem, the way you described everything, put the reader right there with you. Right there in the middle. Feeling, breathing, tasting every word written. This was beautiful. Beautiful delivery." Posted on "Spoils of Victory" by Shadow Colossus
"I am running out of words to describe just how beautiful your words are. Very well put together. Extremely well written. I am smitten with your words. It is not very often someone can baffle me.... But by God, you have done it. I am speechless. Again, much respect to you, sir." Posted on "True" by Shadow Colossus
"I can see why it was published. I am reading this and finding it hard to believe you are only 17. This was extremely well written. The imagery, the underlying emotions written and heard but dare not spoken. This was excellent. Brava!! You, dear sir, have my respect and admiration. You have the talent of an old experienced poet. This.... poetical genius is words. Brava to you!! I tip my hat." Posted on "Baiser de la Mort" by Shadow Colossus
"Nothing like a fierce set of eyes to capture someones soul, eh? It's great to read you again. I've missed you bro. Peace!" Posted on "Azure Eyes" by Dravyn_Abraxas
