Poems Not For The Masses- The Dark Poetry calls you.
Comments by The Lipstick Factor
"Thank you, everyone, for the lovely comments.
'Wacky genius'--I'll take that! ;)
Ms. Madness--no fair leaving comments more poetic than the poem! " Posted on "Button Eyes and Sewn on Smiles" by The Lipstick Factor
"So I leave our dreams
Her heart and my soul
Deranged by monsters
Forever in cobweb--love this. (Monsters is one of my favorite poem words.)
Very visual write--I like!
(your profile pic is really creepy in a good way)" Posted on "Soul of a Spider" by Severin
"The first three lines are outstanding-they could stand on their own as a poem. Nice edge to this, sharp without being too cutting. Kudos." Posted on "Green eggs and white russians" by freudian-slip
""and so I set myself to work
tied strings with heteros
held hands with homos
and replaced the rain with kerosene" --my favorite part.
Nice work Ms. Mars--your writing has matured. I do hope the fires are metaphorical and yer not setting things ablaze for real....besides hearts, of course!" Posted on "I became an arsonist" by Mars
"Well done. Breaks my heart to know that real children live in real fear every day when home is supposed to be place they feel safe. " Posted on "Things That Go Bump In The Night" by Malcholm Dark
"Oh, I was not expecting that ending! Well played. Very clever manipulation of the reader's emotions throughout. " Posted on "The Used To Be Man" by Malcholm Dark
"Wonderful imagery throughout. A very 'visual' read. I'd love to see a painted version! Interesting and unique." Posted on "Do aliens write poetry..." by kinkifrog
"Love the very controlled anger. Hard to write a piece like this that's effective--You've done a stellar job." Posted on "You Are Marked" by Dilated View
"Nice writing. The final stanza could stand on it's own as an entirely separate poem and pulls this one to a very effective close. Good, clean writing." Posted on "Sincerely, Your Stepping Stone" by Dilated View
