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Southbound Lanes and Guitar Strings by Sin
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Southbound Lanes and Guitar Strings

~ Sin ~

As of late Ive been trailing behind your guitar strings darling
Plucking your left over notes out of the air like smiles
And as of late Ive been traveling every southbound road I see
Hoping that it leads its way back to you

But my veins make a terrible map
Of criss crossing emotions to my heart
Where youve wrapped your misty mountain voice around tight
and I cant seem to shake those sweet silken chords
(Not that I would want to even if I could)

But all the hazy stares you send in my direction
Are lost on blue skies instead of my eyes
And its a hard place to be stuck between heartache and envy

If I was that guitar that you strum so skillfully
With fingers hovering and teasing harmony and vibrations
I would sing you a melody that matched your soul
And melted into the magnolia breezes

We would make beautiful music together
With your rough fingertips and my hollow bones

But as of late ive been trailing behind your guitar strings darling
Chasing those little left over notes and hiding them in my pocket
Waiting for southbound smiles to cover the miles
And take me home to you

Baby, I want to come home to you

© 2007 Sin
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, May 15, 2008, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:

    Come back :(

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (666) wrote:

    Beautiful piece! I love the lines, "If I was that guitar that you strum so skillfully With fingers hovering and teasing harmony and vibrations I would sing you a melody that matched your soul...". Ciao, T/S

  • glasshouse On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, glasshouse (697) wrote:

    I don't know how I missed this. Absolutely priceless. Great flow, great words, and of course your great ability to express great emotion. Never understated and never melodramatic. You are, I must believe, perfect. Lovely. --Jes

  • Alanarchy On Sunday, July 15, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

    I still have this tacked up on my wall. I read it at least once a day, it reminds me that I'm loved by someone more beautiful then even these words. And, I love you too.

  • Spiral Downward On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, Spiral Downward (406) wrote:

    This was of the up most beauty and deserves quite the praise! The title drew me in and the words did not let go! There is a very effective use of light and shade here! It evoked emotions long since deceased! Great Write! \Billy/

  • Doc On Saturday, May 19, 2007, Doc (173) wrote:

    I knew my southbound musical charm would get to you sometime

  • Sin On Friday, December 28, 2007, Sin (1406) wrote:

    pst where the heck are you sonny?

  • Sin On Sunday, May 20, 2007, Sin (1406) wrote:

    oh yes i could only fight it for so long ;)

  • mysticventures On Wednesday, May 16, 2007, mysticventures (554) wrote:

    such love !! and expressed so delicately and beautifully - well written work :)

  • Alanarchy On Saturday, May 12, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

    "But all the hazy stars you send in my direction Are lost on blue skies instead of my eyes" *Heart breaks like an old worn string* You are so very beautiful, kristykat. ;)

  • jack paper On Saturday, May 12, 2007, jack paper (157) wrote:

    take me home... country roads.. this here's a country song! *grabs boots and ten gallon hat* yee haw! i like this a lot kristy

  • Mistress Shadow On Saturday, May 12, 2007, Mistress Shadow (326) wrote:

    Beautiful, has that certain flare to it that makes it stand out among other poems. Bravo! ~T

  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 11, 2007, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:

    :) Perfecto! The sentiment and yearning in this were expressed magnificently. Loved it! -Carl

  • carlosjackal On Monday, May 21, 2007, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:

    Still love it!! -Carl

  • Army Barbie On Friday, May 11, 2007, Army Barbie (395) wrote:

    This was so beautiful, Kristy...so beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: Music is the best emotion

  • A former member wrote: I loved this. The ending was so sincere. (I hope I spelled that right) Well done!


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