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I had forgotten how this feels... by Armor for your life
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I had forgotten how this feels...

~ Armor for your life ~

One thing I will always remember
is you,
as you are right now to me.
So gentle and pristine,
this is the lightest break I have ever felt.

I can forget,
because I always forgive.
So be here now against me,
and catch whatever falls from my lips.

"I love you..."

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  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (289) wrote:

    Man... You really convey the emotion so perfectly in so few words. It's quite amazing.

  • wilted On Thursday, May 10, 2007, wilted (358) wrote:

    Reminds me of some feelings i needed to be reminded of.

  • Enigma On Monday, April 23, 2007, Enigma (98) wrote:

    wow I like it....good write.

  • Tania On Friday, April 20, 2007, Tania (235) wrote:

    This write is gentle and pristine to echo your own words.. lovely.

  • Hidayah On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Hidayah (135) wrote:

    The only blissful thing about relationships/love are the memories. Wistful write. Beauty and truth in seemingly small words...

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

    You really do have a unique voice. Strong, but quiet. I haven't read enough of your's. I'll have to fix that pretty soon. anyway, man. I enjoyed.

  • Mylissa On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:

    You are such an astounding writer. I am in awe of your talent, your passion, your voice. You are beauty dripping from a pen.

  • dying angel On Thursday, April 19, 2007, dying angel (1076) wrote:

    "So be here now against me, and catch whatever falls from my lips." you have this way of perfectly portraying the vulnerability of love. whenever i read something of yours, i whisper it because i'm always afraid of breaking the words.

  • Armor for your life On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Armor for your life (9) wrote:

    Thank I really appreciate that sentiment. Also a thank you to army barbie for faving.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, April 19, 2007, carlosjackal (1801) wrote:

    Like an arrow straight through the heart...To love again without pain or fear of loss...fantastic stuff!

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Army Barbie (395) wrote:

    This was stunning in it's simplicity.

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, April 19, 2007, Army Barbie (395) wrote:

    And it's a fave for me.


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