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My Infection by Disassembly Boy
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My Infection

~ Disassembly Boy ~

Raven screams
and all your dreams
are filled with nightmares.

Oh, litle girl, are you scared?

Do you believe me when I tell you
not to believe?

Are you looking when I tell you
to look away?

Just close your eyes
and wish them all dead..
Your ghosts and demons;
you can't get them out of your head
or
The sounds of footprints
trailing closely behind.
The birds
all hover
as you look up at the sky...

I watch the feathers fall around you,
as you run like hell..
Oh, darling, I think it's just time..
.. And I know you've got a secret to tell..

(don't we all)


So trade your confessions
in for possession;
the sweetest injection..
.. Let me soak your veins
with my infection.

© 2007 Disassembly Boy
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  • DarkDruidess On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, DarkDruidess (162) wrote:

    incredibly well put together...I loved the images and feelings that this piece brought forth....excellent.

  • A former member wrote: image invoking and nicely played.

  • Possesion On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Possesion (152) wrote:

    i love this. it made my meek mind swim in images from one line to the next. very nice.

  • unspeakable truth On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, unspeakable truth (124) wrote:

    Great write indeed....

  • Tania On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Tania (235) wrote:

    '.. let me soak your veins with my infection..' mmm sounds good. Great write kev...love it.

  • A former member wrote: jeesh...the ending of this piece in itself blew me away, but when coupled with the rhyme scheme and the INTENSE imagery...well...infection well might be a thing I take willingly, if coming from your words. ~*Beth*~

  • Loketha Angel On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Loketha Angel (138) wrote:

    This was just...wow...I am speechless...

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful flow indeed. This was amazing

  • A former member wrote: oh my I love that "So trade your confessions in for possession; the sweetest injection.. .. Let me soak your veins with my infection. " very very beautiful flow of words:]


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