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Do you remember... by Imsosickxxx
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Do you remember...

~ Imsosickxxx ~

Do you remember that time when I told you that frogs bite, and then I chased you around? You were screaming and then started crying and I felt bad so I gave you my last piece of candy.

Or the time I pushed you in the swing so you could jump into the pile of leaves? You scraped your knee so I got you a band-aid and made it better.

Do you remember the time when we both went to the fair grounds and a boy made fun of you so I threw a rock and hit him in the head? I came home with a broken nose that night.

Or the time when I saw you at the dance and we were both alone? That was the first night I kissed you on the cheek.

Do you remember that night I was at work and you called me to come pick you up because your car broke down? They wouldn’t let me leave to come get you so I quit.

Or the time when you told me you loved me and we’d be together forever? The stars never shined so brightly in your eyes.

Do you remember when you missed your birthday party because the airplane was late? I took you out to the lake that night and there was a table for two.

Or the time I told you I had to go away for awhile? I could barely talk to you through the tears.

Do you remember when I told you that you were the reason I’m still here? Well here I am and you still are.

Or the time I told you I was going to be a few days late coming home? Then I opened the door and you screamed.

Do you remember when you said you were going to a party and you would call me when you got home? I wated up but you never did.

Or the time when I cried my eyes out in the chair beside your bed? I stayed up for three nights so I could be the first person there when you awoke.

Do you remember the time I told you that I will always love you and nothing would change that? I know your eyes were closed but was your heart still open?

Or the last time I gave you flowers? It was warm that day, so I laid them to rest on the fresh dirt, and talked to you until the rain came…you always did love talking in the rain…

© 2007 Imsosickxxx
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  • Deaths Apostle On Thursday, October 29, 2009, Deaths Apostle (117) wrote:

    This touched my heart...*sniff*

  • warmaprylrain On Thursday, January 1, 2009, warmaprylrain (188) wrote:

    sad, eloquent, lovely, frail, and such poetic beauty this is. ~Rain

  • Dysphoria On Thursday, May 1, 2008, Dysphoria (144) wrote:

    oh wow, this touched somewhere deep for me..this is so beautifully written in all its sorrow and heartache...I love it..

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, November 6, 2007, Narcissa (752) wrote:

    tear. sigh. tear.

  • Lilith On Tuesday, November 6, 2007, Lilith (21) wrote:

    wow, how beautifuly sad....love it, the way everything seems so happy, then suddenly it's not. great! ~Sara Linn~

  • Circe Avalon On Tuesday, November 6, 2007, Circe Avalon (146) wrote:

    well tears, thanks....marvelous. now I do look like someone ran over my dog... good write. sorry, good write.

  • A former member wrote: do you remember? god..i do..and it's something we can all identify with, as you have noticed. this is very unique, thank you for sharing

  • Rhys Ki On Thursday, May 31, 2007, Rhys Ki (98) wrote:

    Wow, I do see the similarities. Personally, I like yours better. It almost made me cry...*tear* I love it, though. Very tragic, yes. Good Job. Love, Jessica.

  • vaultgrl On Monday, April 23, 2007, vaultgrl (211) wrote:

    i've never read something like this.....you did an amazing job with this......the begining it was a love story everyone would long for but an ending not many could accept........ thanks for sharing.....great write....

  • Army Barbie On Friday, April 20, 2007, Army Barbie (395) wrote:

    I've never cried when reading about love until now...The ending was shocking. Only made me cry a little bit more. You have an amazing heart any girl would be lucky to entangle their's in

  • cucuio On Monday, March 12, 2007, cucuio (169) wrote:

    This was beuatiful.With every line creating emotions. There is nothing I could say, that hasn't been said.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, March 11, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (289) wrote:

    Man... this is so tragic and beautiful. Every word touched my heart.

  • Imsosickxxx On Sunday, March 11, 2007, Imsosickxxx (109) wrote:

    Thank you all for the kind words, it means alot :)

  • A former member wrote: This is amazing. My heart aches for you.

  • openureyes On Saturday, March 10, 2007, openureyes (92) wrote:

    This is so beautiful it hurts. Made my heart drop.

  • prettydisgrace On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, prettydisgrace (109) wrote:

    Very good. beauty mixed with sadness. thank you for sharing.

  • Swift On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Swift (46) wrote:

    That hit home.. Amazing write.. Wonderful words. Chills and tears, all the way. ~Amber

  • soul dancer On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, soul dancer (133) wrote:

    This gave me chills and brought tears to my eyes. So sad and beautiful. Well done.

  • Sin On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Sin (1406) wrote:

    oh dear god, this broke me into a million pieces..so tragic yet so soft and beautiful..this was stunning *tips hat* ~kristy


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