a moon, or a star...

if, forever
could
hold
in her spirits heart
a moment
in time
from this meeting afar
i bet that she
(if she were a moon or a star)
could never
be more beautiful
than in the moments
i saw

• On Sunday, March 25, 2007, heartdripsblack (681) wrote:
  
  this was very, very inspiring and wonderfully written. ~ saddened.
  
  
• On Monday, March 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:
  
  sometimes i miss the good ones, didnt realize you have been here for so long.. and your words shatter a glass heart that has been glued too many times, bravo, i love pieces that ripple that effect in me
  
  
• On Friday, March 2, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:
  
  I had to read this twice, and second time around....I love it. You really brought out beauty here, and the flow works. Great work.