Faded

Your memory is fading.. This constant revere.. it slowly slides away…
Like a flashing neon light that’s just about
to diffuse… it struggles to flicker..
but after a while.. it just stops.
and as the night sky still shines black..
I look to the stars..
I see your face…
It looks so far away now…
Traces of your smile still grace the skyline..
And it enlightens my heart..
But only for a while..
As the wind blows.. things change..
Emotions they slip away..
like the final tear falling to its ultimate death..
I wipe it slowly from my face
Watching it slowly elapse...
Like closing the pages to
An over and done
chapter.. your
memory.. I
just let
it go..
.

• On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Sketso (732) wrote:
  
  Well done... I can relate. Isn't odd how even the memories we don't want to let go of eventually fade?
  
  
• On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Six-Out (1622) wrote:
  
  that ending was torment in text. I loved this piece, and I think i need to erad more of your stuff.
  
  
• A former member wrote: This puts a picture in my head of you saying this piece while your sitting on the beach somewhere looking at the colors of the sunset on the ever moving ocean... I love this......... __josh__
  
  
• On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Vilification (24) wrote:
  
  i agree with anna in the fact that this was beautifully done i enjoyed the read...
  
  
• On Monday, February 26, 2007, DarkLord (7) wrote:
  
  Very emotional, I like this...
  
  
• On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Anna Helianthus (972) wrote:
  
  damn, i really enjoyed this..sort of breathy and capturing, a reverent breath clinging to a soft sort of love. you should write in this style more, it really works for you. beautifully done.
  
  
• On Friday, February 16, 2007, Disassembly Boy (79) wrote:
  
  Beautifully written, and I love the imagery.. :)
  
  
• On Friday, February 16, 2007, heartdripsblack (682) wrote:
  
  definately one of my favs from you so far. nicely done as always. ~ red.
  
  
• On Friday, February 16, 2007, Tania (235) wrote:
  
  aww shucks! ;)
  
  
• On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Bella Butchery (949) wrote:
  
  art is deeply personal and reflects yourself. unique like fingerprints or snowflakes, you have a certain grace, an elegance to your style. have more faith in yourself, this was passionate and delecate. superb :)
  
  
• A former member wrote: God this was wonderful. Well done.
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Mistress Shadow (327) wrote:
  
  You chose your words in such a way that tragedy seeps in between them. Well done. ~T
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, dying angel (1076) wrote:
  
  the compostion of this piece adds to the dramatic feel of it. you painted vividness. i could close my eyes and see you there...and see the sky you're looking at. great write.
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, prettydisgrace (109) wrote:
  
  wonderful write tania.you really know how to capture emotion.pleasent read.
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, LOKI (170) wrote:
  
  Very nice I like the closure in the end.I just let it go.Good finishing lines
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:
  
  I think the ending wraps this piece up perfectly. it is crushing, yet powerful. Wonderful write.
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, raskal (213) wrote:
  
  this is very insightful -quite soothing in a plaintive sort of way -some great lines.