spraypaint.serenade [we're strung and in love]

~ Six-Out ~

distort-.

drumstick-madness. they may
call us the crazy fucks.
midnight magic- and we're mindless.
tied down by cords and words.

mic in hand. metaphorical maniac
is what one said about me. and the boys
sing my words like we're already famous.
wake the neighbors. they need to hear
this wisdom- that spills from the amplifiers.
like soundwave-spraypaint.
and graffiti tag lines.

guitar strings strangling meanings from the screaming
erupting from my throat. I want to be
my words. as the bass beats twice as hard
as my heart. tripping streamlined whispers
and we sing.

yes we sing.

sweat dripping. the feedback roars.
and I mouth- fuck the misbelievers. this is heaven.
and we break silence like we're famous.
tonight.

we- scream.
that this. is. our.

[freedom]

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Comments on "spraypaint.serenade [we're strung and in love]"

On Saturday, October 6, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (289) wrote:

Hell yes. Music is what it's all about.
On Sunday, May 13, 2007, Malice In Wonderland (752) wrote:

I love it. It's kinda how I feel when sing with a band...I miss it:(
A former member wrote: you'll always be a rockstar to me. ;)
On Thursday, February 8, 2007, zanewill (101) wrote:

write-on six-out...that's the key: "do it like ur famous". hey man, how do u think all those people in LA got famous!?LOL>>>>>>>>>>>>peace-out
On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Twilight (1917) wrote:

those last three lines gave me the usual chills that only your work can give me
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Anna Helianthus (972) wrote:

ah, this is perfect jon.."the boys sing my words like we're already famous." you've captured an intense feeling, as only you could do.
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (666) wrote:

"soundwave-spraypaint" - Fantastic! : ) Ciao, T/S
On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, PoeticHellion (210) wrote:

This was beautiful. There will always be power in music with friends.
On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Astra Dei (586) wrote:

Wonderful.
A former member wrote: Hahaha. This was kick ass. Nicely done.
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Lynaes (1028) wrote:

..and I can see you with your band, mic in hand, singing your heart out. I gotta hear that voice of yours soon. s usual, you've orchestrated a beauty symphony of words Jon, I love this.
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (153) wrote:

agreed, it all comes into words beautifully, now we just need to hear what it is you gotta say. Missed reading your works, glad to be back and can't wait to keep reading, thanks a bunch. -Heather-
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

Mooooooooooooooooooooooooore cowbell!!!!
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Alanarchy (1483) wrote:

"Mic in hand. Metaphorical maniac is what one said about me." Loved that, man.
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:

"and I mouth- fuck the misbelievers. this is heaven." Fav. line by far. I love this.
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

well you found that perfect title for starters, and you some how captured my feelings when im at band practice, thank you for putting it into words
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

had to read again, fav for sure