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The Break Up by Bluegirl
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The Break Up

~ Bluegirl ~

Hope is not here
A feather on the Wing
Of Tomorrows dove

The early bird gets
The Worm
I won't take another bite
From your poison apple

Like Sleeping Beauty
I wrap myself unnessasarily
In the folds of your pain
I drink deeply in your cries

It eases me to feel your ache
I am pleased to have given it to you
Don't throw your trash
In my backyard, my backyards full

I feel you slip away,
White Dove,
You never existed.

© 2006 Bluegirl
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  • A former member wrote: Wow your really good!!!

  • Bast On Tuesday, July 8, 2008, Bast (813) wrote:

    "Don't throw your trash In my backyard, my backyards full"- perfect lines.

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, April 16, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:

    smitten

  • Rachel On Wednesday, November 15, 2006, Rachel (306) wrote:

    *hugs*

  • Mylissa On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mylissa (1128) wrote:

    "You never existed." that is such a strong way to end...I love this.

  • monalisamarie On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, monalisamarie (126) wrote:

    "I won't take another bite form your poison apple" Amazing

  • Instant Insanity On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Instant Insanity (657) wrote:

    Oh How I love to read the poems about birds:-) ][ ][


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