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Insomnia by Bluegirl
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Insomnia

~ Bluegirl ~

M_s_in_ Pie_e_

monday
saturday
shall we take a ride on the trolley?
thursday
tuesday
I'm lost in the kingdom of
make believe
january
august
it's a quarter past a blur

?

Leaf bear is here
1:00pm
2:00PM
3:00AM
8:00PM
9:00AM

It's a cruel joke
With a never ending
alarm clock


SLAM!

Tell me I'm dreaming.

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  • Sin On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Sin (1412) wrote:

    this reminded me vaguely of Mr Rogers lol...unique to say the least ~kristy

  • TaintedButterfly On Monday, September 25, 2006, TaintedButterfly (841) wrote:

    I've struggled with insomnia most of my life, and have begrudgingly embraced it. So I know this feeling all too well. Great piece. Julia~

  • thefairytaleheart On Saturday, September 23, 2006, thefairytaleheart (19) wrote:

    very lovely. i feel that way most times. yay prozak.

  • The Zebra Warrior On Saturday, September 23, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2210) wrote:

    I might be dreaming too...originality persists and its refrshing to see....brilliantly creative as Jay says....

  • Jay Jii On Saturday, September 23, 2006, Jay Jii (300) wrote:

    "M_s_in_ Pie_e_" - fabulously creative! :?)

  • Astra Dei On Friday, September 22, 2006, Astra Dei (589) wrote:

    -sigh- no shit my friend. the abstrct thoughts that you cant describe and youre left watching that damn clock

  • A former member wrote: "It's a cruel joke/With a never ending/alarm clock" Yes, that it is. Insomnia...never a fun thing to be awake when the rest of the world dreams peacefully. Nice write. I can relate. ~*Beth*~


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