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~ Bluegirl ~

I still think
you'll come home
any second now
capture me with
your candy kisses
whisper words
I've taken for granted
tell me that you
meant it
when you said
"Love always"
But I know how
I've hurt you
and I know
you're gone
so I'll keep
clutching this
picture and remind
myself
you left
because
of me

© 2006 Bluegirl
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  • A former member wrote: "whisper words/I've taken for granted" You've a beautiful voice, m'dear; I know these words so well. Jules is right, it's not your fault. And the person this is for should know so. ~*Beth*~

  • TaintedButterfly On Sunday, September 17, 2006, TaintedButterfly (837) wrote:

    awww hun this brought me to tears. If he doesn't come back, it's not your fault, for at least he knows the truth, you admitted it above. Wonderful job! *hugs* Julia~

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl (213) wrote:

    ah, thank you. Your words do mean a lot to me. Alas, if only it were a "he."


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