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Bloody Kiss by Bluegirl
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Bloody Kiss

~ Bluegirl ~

Reposted, as per requested

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I open the door, and enter a world of bitter hate
Where life withers, and happiness dies
At your command.
You wrap me up in your dark embrace
Slowly draining me of life
And exchanging it for something deeper
Something more disturbing
A puncture wound
Infects my body, sending pure venom
Spiraling through my tiny veins
As it courses through my system
I feel myself growing unhumanly cold
I look up at your pale face
Devoid of color
A streak of red streams
From your thin lips
I feel that this is the end
But I am too weak
To escape your grasp of love
And so I will return
Tomorrow night
To my love, my pain - my death.

© 2006 Bluegirl
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  • A former member wrote: oh my god..i freaking loved this..it was amazing..

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Saturday, September 16, 2006, CorruptedLittleGirl (306) wrote:

    It brings to mind the image of two lovers in a cold, dark, secluded closet, slowly dying. I'm not sure why. I like it.

  • The Zebra Warrior On Saturday, September 16, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2210) wrote:

    hey hey...very darkly delicious, like a vampire lullaby or an exchange with the Grim Reaper, dvoid of colour - then come 'red streams'....visually enticing...and welcome back, it would seem merited..Col.


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