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loveless invisibility

~ to love a psycho ~

no one ever sees the girl
out in the open
yet all alone
surrounded and engulfed by the sea of everyone
tears hidden in the corners of her eyes
she wants to be seen
but is refused at every oportune moment
the mirror she looks in
only goes one way
with her broken smile
she gazes at the world around her
and realizes it has no eyes
selfish pride
her life has been broken
so many times and again
no one will care
no one will see
hold her hand
or take her in
she wants to be loved

but she cannot be seen

she can never win

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  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, June 27, 2006, mywristshurt (449) wrote:

    someone.. i liked it and it touched me

  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, June 27, 2006, mywristshurt (449) wrote:

    if this is about you than if theres anything you want me to do, just tell me.. this poem just screams "HELP" to me and wants her to be loved.. its a wonderful piece and has a meaning that everyone has feelings and you should consider that when talking to

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, June 6, 2006, The Crimson Queen (1056) wrote:

    You close your eyes and never look to see..that there is love pouring from my soul just for you. I know how much you crave to be held and loved by a lover, but do not give up your hopes now.. because love will find it's way into your heart.

  • Dissolving Poet On Monday, June 5, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:

    This kind of reminds me, of me in a sad sorrowful way. It torn into me and just ripped my whole body apart leaving me on the steps to get trampled. Love you ~nightly

  • The Zebra Warrior On Monday, June 5, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:

    a kind of drifting almost with an ethereal silky feel..like a dream within a dream..strange and beguiling and very effective without ornament...wowsers!! Col.


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