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Candyland by PoeticHellion
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Candyland

~ PoeticHellion ~

Childish games. they play us like
Candyland. I will be your Snow Queen, okay?

Now you pick a character. Gumdrop King?
Okay…

You are sweet as sin, and I can’t help but
sigh. (we will never feel this way
for each other again)

Blue. Orange. Yellow. Red. Green. Purple.
pick, jump, go.
(it’s your turn)

CANDYLAND IS NOT LIFE…but sometimes,
yeah sometimes, .i.wish.it.was.

I wish that making
a move
was as easy as
using color.
and that the goal,
yeah. that.
was as easy as
meeting a King.
I wish that we could
Skip a turn, sit down,
Be together for a moment
(never more than
A few paces away)
(not a few states)

I wish we were all
“together” and
“close,”
.but.
I know.
CANDYLAND IS NOT
And never will be
REAL LIFE.

© 2006 PoeticHellion
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  • The Zebra Warrior On Wednesday, June 28, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:

    Jill..as i honary member of Nakedism the concept of biting candy, and/or being in a fantasy candyland realm is just too enticing to pass...where do I bit e first, I can taste it now..courtesy of you..cheers!!

  • AniDayz On Sunday, June 25, 2006, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

    the simplistic concept of this is profound. and the way in which you correlate colours, Candyland and the use of metaphors, allows me to taste the

  • AniDayz On Sunday, June 25, 2006, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

    invaluable sweetness of a child's dreams...which ,when time shoves its fingers through...is seemingly hanging in the air, tauntingly....what makes such simple.beauty seemingly become a place wherein empty resides?

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Nail Bunny (184) wrote:

    Jill, how are you so very very incredible??

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, May 25, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:

    This was just fucking awesome Jill just as great as you are!


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