Six times Poetic

those brilliant words flow
from your pen.
your startling (staggering) voice swallows
me whole.
met-a-phor after met-a-phor
(innuendo number 86,522.6)
this is what everyone
calls “romantic.”
(childhood crushes?)
you are not a child, nor a teen
(two hands on the keyboard, one beer in front)
as you sip, drop, continue.
you are brilliantamazing
(PHILOSOPHY SHOULD HAVE BEEN YOUR MAJOR.)
that, or sex-ed.

• On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:
  
  Wonderful...:)
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 24, 2006, Mari (529) wrote:
  
  hah!
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 28, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:
  
  ha ha ha..oh no ego stroking of this kind shouldn't be allowed for towel whipping; cream licking Six-Pack...holy Hannibal Lectors in fridge cool light..a befitting tribute no less!!
  
  
• On Sunday, June 25, 2006, AniDayz (1051) wrote:
  
  this twists and .pokes. at my membranes...hmmmmm...:)
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Nail Bunny (184) wrote:
  
  That's pretty richous. i dig it.
  
  
• On Friday, May 19, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:
  
  This was very beautiful Jill, *giggle* I loved everything about it
  
  
• On Friday, May 19, 2006, Astra Dei (586) wrote:
  
  We're going to have to start a new forum just to hold all the ego enhancing poems dedicated to jon.
  
  
• On Friday, May 19, 2006, Six-Out (1604) wrote:
  
  Oh please. There's not that many.
  
  
• On Friday, May 19, 2006, SilentStalker (1244) wrote:
  
  ...well no, because half of them were from people that wrote hate poems about him, and ended up leaving because they just made him feel better... :P
  
  
• On Friday, May 19, 2006, snowdrop (2144) wrote:
  
  you're so absolutely gorgeous. i'm breathless, in this.