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Ash White Scars by urban_angel
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Ash White Scars

~ urban_angel ~

A glance down at my wrists
and you'll be told a tale
the reasons are getting old
explainations getting stale
To look past, at my arms
oh, the scars you'll see
deep and not healing
like the scars within me
Broken flesh, ash white scars
what must people think
insanity is an escape
and you know i'm at the brink
I can deal with alot
deal with what life brings
but demons, such as happiness
i cope not with these things
They make my heart not hurt
and i yearn for the insane
for every sip of happiness
there's two swallows of pain
So taunt my scars, be afraid
but worry not, my dear
it's not pain plaguing me
it's happiness i fear.

Copyright 2003 urban_angel
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  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, urbanhumility (1350) wrote:

    beautuful , sadly beautiful, well done well said..........urbanhumility

  • Velvet_Raventon On Friday, May 30, 2003, Velvet_Raventon (654) wrote:

    You have a way to express yourself trough rhymes that is just too beautiful. Velvet.

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, May 29, 2003, CharlottesWeb (599) wrote:

    Angel!! Where'd you go! This is the first of a kind like this that I've read from you. It's nice...it's good. I like it.~DW~

  • A former member wrote: I loved it and I know what you mean I can relate to it very much great job..

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, April 1, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (289) wrote:

    Wow...such a beautiful poem! I keep using the word beautiful to describe your poetry, but I can't think of any other word. lol sorry! Great poem! Keep it up!!

  • diavolessa On Tuesday, April 1, 2003, diavolessa (250) wrote:

    clg said it all! its such a terific poem! :)

  • GothicBlack On Tuesday, April 1, 2003, GothicBlack (230) wrote:

    Tragic is a word to describe this. I'm sorry you feel this way, as I think I might too (denial is in the way at the moment, today). lol. great write, as always. ~gothic~


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