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"abstraction" by PoeticHellion
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"abstraction"

~ PoeticHellion ~

filled with misconceptions,
i am here.
i am there.
solidity,
evades me.

connect, connect con--
separate.
spacialize.
[e]Xist

SMOKE rises,
i am here, there,
no where, everywhere.

(jumbled) mass of misconceptions
you are me.
i am you.

falling through the cracks.
nothing even... connects.
i am.
i am not.

search.search.search
lose.find.
begin.end.
peace.war.
opposites attract,
abstracts detract.
iamyou.
youareme.

weare
wearenot...

endendend.

© 2006 PoeticHellion
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  • saintedmad On Wednesday, June 10, 2009, saintedmad (1418) wrote:

    love the tendriled effect with visuals. .. matches the ambience of voice and image; of perfect bl.ending.

  • Chaos God On Monday, May 26, 2008, Chaos God (116) wrote:

    Not Too Bad.

  • AniDayz On Friday, May 19, 2006, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

    amasing creation of fukking fantastical.insight, this is so wonderful with an intensity that is fabulously enticing, this speaks with such depth and shatters the realm of 'everyday existence.' muchly appreciated.

  • Nail Bunny On Friday, April 28, 2006, Nail Bunny (187) wrote:

    Wow... Jill... you've outdone yourself. this is... breathtaking.

  • snowdrop On Saturday, April 15, 2006, snowdrop (2157) wrote:

    I cannot believe I missed this before now.. immaculatly thread(ed) together..reads in skips, almost.. I am so beautifully wound within this..

  • Thorn On Monday, April 10, 2006, Thorn (359) wrote:

    I love it. Although, truth be told, I liked it better the way it was laid out on paper. But, having lost it's artistic presentation, it has lost none of its poetic spirit.

  • Dissolving Poet On Monday, April 10, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:

    Great poem my dear I loved it, it swollowed me whole


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