What are Words?

"True Love"
Said the Poet's heart
to his pen.

"Lines and shapes"
Said the Poet's pen
to his page.

"letters and words"
Said the page
to Her eyes.


Come closer...
Let me whisper in your ear...


"True Love"
Said the Poet's heart
to his mouth.

"Motion and vibrations"
Said the Poet's mouth
to the air.

"sounds and words"
Said the air
to Her ear.


Come closer...
Let me hold you in my arms...


"True Love"
Said the Poet's heart
to Hers.

And though neither spoke a word...

"True Love"
Replied Her heart
to His.

More comments:

• A former member wrote: interesting & very creative ;)
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, Army Barbie (395) wrote:
  
  Darling, this always moves me. I seriously think it's one of your best. I miss you, post more fucktard
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, blue (1605) wrote:
  
  hey! I own the copyrights for 'fucktard'!! you owe me tacos lady.
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, waterchica999 (36) wrote:
  
  that was just beautiful and a wonderfully new way to see it
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, Bluegirl (213) wrote:
  
  awwww. Wow. I got tingles reading this. Well done. :)
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (666) wrote:
  
  Beautiful piece! I love the flow and imagery. Ciao, T/S
  
  
• On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, Spiritus_Frumenti (365) wrote:
  
  this felt magical and romantic. i love it.
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, snowdrop (2144) wrote:
  
  The flow of this piece alone wraps about the the mind in a romanced fashion that lures all of your senses to a hush. This piece reminds me, personally of those moments when you're most deeply in love. True love.
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, snowdrop (2144) wrote:
  
  .. and to speak on a more deeper level, the connection spoken between the poet, his pen, his heart, her, and him.. all that of whis is spoken here is reverberated in an echo that is only rewitnessed in the eyes of the reader.
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, snowdrop (2144) wrote:
  
  Thank you. This is exquisite.
  
  
• On Monday, February 20, 2006, MindRape (715) wrote:
  
  awwww this is sooooo SWEET! i love this! :D a lot deeper than the avg love poem
  
  
• On Monday, February 6, 2006, dying angel (1076) wrote:
  
  oh im so faving this...since i read it millions of thousands of times.
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 25, 2006, Anna Helianthus (972) wrote:
  
  i can't believe that i haven't commented on this one before, i could have sworn i did..i've read it many times, and it still strikes me with the same calm trickling feeling. it's like a peace-filled summit, and your words are at the top..
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 25, 2006, Anna Helianthus (972) wrote:
  
  ..winding throughout in such a swift trickling motion. every bit of side details added to this piece were expertly placed and quietly woven. i see this as a person lamenting softly, repeating the words over and over until the become seamless..
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 25, 2006, Anna Helianthus (972) wrote:
  
  ..and utterly flawless with stream quality. i could babble about this piece for a long time, it's such a special poem.
  
  
• On Thursday, January 26, 2006, Thorn (356) wrote:
  
  Wow. Thank you :)
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 24, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (202) wrote:
  
  oh, this is so beautiful... i love it...
  
  
• A former member wrote: awww very very sweet.. yeah i know too much of a girl comment...bravo, encore
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, Army Barbie (395) wrote:
  
  You are amazing...and if I could say that a million times it wouldn't be enough. I could even say exuberant and it wouldnt qualify as exemplary. So take this meaningless babble as my love for this piece.