Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
[Get Full Access & Your Own Profile: Join For Free]
hah, rock on life by King_Crazy_Dave
dark Poetry
dark Poetry

hah, rock on life

~ King_Crazy_Dave ~

When it rains, its said, it pours
And when it does it does with
Cats its said, and dogs
So neck deep in wet noses
I’ll laugh as a scratching post
and where’s the
wolves, I’ll ask, and tigers
and when it pours
I’ll say
Its drizzle
for its fun for me to manage
because its how it goes
and how it goes , I know, is constant
and claws wont get me down
forever more evolving
concrete, I know, exists
but fluid’s where I live
and ever am I grateful
to love it when it rains
and when I’m old, and damp, I’ll stop
with an army of tigers
I’ll laugh
And wolves

© 2005 King_Crazy_Dave
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Tags

Comments on "hah, rock on life"

Log in to post comments.
  • carlosjackal On Saturday, June 7, 2008, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:

    =) This is a fantastic upper for when the odds feel stacked against you..Touch of the English :) Rock on, Dave!

  • disc On Friday, May 11, 2007, disc (56) wrote:

    Roll with the punches. I like how you capture the downs of life.

  • disc On Friday, May 11, 2007, disc (56) wrote:

    But, one must never lose hope.

  • bloody LOVEly On Friday, January 6, 2006, bloody LOVEly (106) wrote:

    hahaa, i love your mind.

  • Lydia Jade On Friday, December 9, 2005, Lydia Jade (1047) wrote:

    I really like how this was put together it kept my eyes focused on each word waiting to see where the next would lead until the end...just to see if there was a point

  • A former member wrote: I miss talking to you. you get my 1 comment for the year. ;-) because I like this work. and 'cause I miss you.

  • Evil On Monday, November 7, 2005, Evil (425) wrote:

    yeah.. take it blow by blow.. life is so combustible.. spontaneously, really. you have me by the heart, dear. this was inspiring.

  • suicideseason On Monday, November 7, 2005, suicideseason (1906) wrote:

    You're like...ScorpionHela...in male form...I hope you understand.

  • glasshouse On Monday, November 7, 2005, glasshouse (697) wrote:

    I really like the way this is written. The way you keep referring to the fact that it is SAID but not calling it truth. Finding your own truth and dealing with life. I like this a lot. Perfectly portrayed in perfect words and phrases. -Glass

  • A former member wrote: very nice write, it enabled me to see 2 different perspectives. and i do enjoy variety

  • A former member wrote: It's like every poem I read here has a hidden message for each of to see as differently as we like. Thats why day and night go together for the better when you realize...exactly that.

  • snowdrop On Monday, November 7, 2005, snowdrop (2144) wrote:

    um, what?

  • Malice In Wonderland On Monday, November 7, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (752) wrote:

    I loved the outlook of this...the words perfect, as always. Good write, Dave.

  • snowdrop On Monday, November 7, 2005, snowdrop (2144) wrote:

    ..to me, this write seriously just beamed a smirk and a cackle..thoroughly enjoyed..twisted itself into a mocking sort of sing-song..inspiring..rock on, Dave.

  • vaultgrl On Monday, November 7, 2005, vaultgrl (211) wrote:

    hehehe......"and when it pours i'll say it drizzles"......i love this entire write, but that line made me laugh and think a little too.....kinda like it's all in the eye of the beholder.....great write!.....


How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2010 GeniusWeb.com LLC
[Join (free)]    [Poetry Site]    [Read Poems]    [More Poets]    [Terms & Privacy]