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The Man Whom God Forgot by shadowsinthelight
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The Man Whom God Forgot

~ shadowsinthelight ~

There is a man whom God forgot
A soul lost from His memory
He exists in His blind spot
This is why he wanders eternally

He does not belong to heaven
He does not belong to hell
Him, neither can claim
For they do not know his name

I met him one starless night
In a cold winter's dream
He walked up to the fire
And sat across from me

I could not focus on his face
Shifting with the flame's dance
Ebony pupils remained clear
In new colors of brilliance

He spoke, "So you sit before me
A lost expression in your eyes
Yes, I do know the secret
The mystery and meaning of life

I can fill your bending ears
Full of cryptic truths and lies
But what I say or you think you hear
Will not change that look in your eyes

But you do have questions tonight
You have one less day in your life
One less day to make things right
You've just spent another day in paradise

You still believe in happiness
And you still believe in love
You have sent your prayers skyward
And received nothing but quiet from above

It may seem very strange
But silence is an answer unto itself
You must learn your own life
Walk the road by yourself

Go ahead, send your prayers outward
But your answers will come from within
It is all in the perception of your mind
The voice of God speaks from within

Love and happiness are phantoms
Living in the corner of your sight
You are fortunate if they touch you
A feeling as fleeting as twilight

I once knew the taste of rain
And the spaces in-between
I once lived a tender touch
And I used to have a dream

Others can remove what you call your own
But you do deflect the wind that blows
As you do reflect the light that glows
You are responsible for your own soul

Take the time to taste the rain
And recall a forgotten face
By remembering a lost name
You have justified their eternal place

And you, God has not forgotten
You are not beyond salvation
Beware, Satan has his eye on you
You are not beyond damnation

You can get by quietly
And manage to survive
Or you can rise above the crowd
Either way, you are alive

Though you may feel all alone
There is only one who is on his own
But you will exist in the eternal frame
If even one remembers your name"

He arose next to the fire
And became the smoke of Good-Bye
He allowed the breeze to take him
And I was left to live or to die

Of all the billions of lives
He lived his in anonymity
His soul slipped through the cracks
Save for one, he did it anonymously

Yes, I will endure the fire
And taste the falling rain
And I will attempt to know
Those spaces in-between

There will be love and hate
Joy and sorrow in my life
But for now
I have just lived another day in paradise

And I will remember
Your face and name
Maybe, one day, for me
You will do the same

©1999 by steve giacomini

Copyright 2003 shadowsinthelight
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  • Lydia Jade On Monday, December 28, 2009, Lydia Jade (1075) wrote:

    Iv read this before and was always so moved, but could find no words to express it, thank you i suppose is all it needs

  • gnrrain On Wednesday, May 27, 2009, gnrrain (19) wrote:

    I was definately entranced throughtout the whole thing. --David--

  • MESUN On Monday, March 23, 2009, MESUN (289) wrote:

    It's funny to return to something and have it make you feel a little at peace the same way it did the first time you found it.

  • Argentum On Sunday, January 13, 2008, Argentum (13) wrote:

    I remembered loving this poem when I was a member before. I'm so glad to find it again!

  • Aunty Depressant On Thursday, April 5, 2007, Aunty Depressant (549) wrote:

    Yes ..if this is as good as it gets..savoring awareness and honoring others seems like a worthy goal indeed.

  • A former member wrote: Breathe Taking

  • Spiral Downward On Saturday, February 10, 2007, Spiral Downward (415) wrote:

    Tremendous

  • A former member wrote: quite essential it's perverse manner...flows through the creaks where the rivers once flowed.

  • A former member wrote: wow... that was just... wow! i could only dream of writing the way you do :) great job, keepr rockin and writing

  • Ainsof On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Ainsof (2122) wrote:

    a tale most intricately woven by a campfire for the ages, with the fabric of the universe for the faceless years before us... memerable is a litote

  • HalfDarkAngel On Thursday, May 11, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (79) wrote:

    This is the most amazing piece of work i've ever seen on this site

  • dp_whipping_girl On Wednesday, December 28, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (333) wrote:

    wow. so much in this piece to awaken the parts of my spirit that have been dormant too long, so much i have to think about now. powerful. extremely wonderful write

  • A former member wrote: That was beautiful. As I read the words, I was taken on a journey. Bravo!

  • MESUN On Thursday, September 15, 2005, MESUN (289) wrote:

    yeah, i am one of the expired number posts below, and my reactions are still the same.

  • Serenity On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity (533) wrote:

    So beautiful

  • happilydepressed On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, happilydepressed (192) wrote:

    *in awe*

  • Astra Dei On Monday, December 27, 2004, Astra Dei (589) wrote:

    it was really long, which usually puts me off, even with my own works, but this one kept my attention. even flow and rythm.

  • Butterfly On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, Butterfly (113) wrote:

    This was really awesome. It flowed so nice and...man this was just awesome.

  • A former member wrote: the flow, the flow man. awe striking. "You are not beyond salvation," "You are not beyond damnation." great.

  • MelvinOliverDrauma On Monday, September 27, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (501) wrote:

    this was excellent all the way though the rhyming the content it was all just masterfully done


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