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A Long Time Ago by PoeticHellion
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A Long Time Ago

~ PoeticHellion ~

I stopped caring about
What other people think
A long time ago.
What do I care,
If someone else thinks
My hair isn't quite right,
My style is a little off,
My shoes are a little too ripped up,
I weight a little too much?
Even if it's a compliment,
I'm not planning on dwelling
On the subject
Of what others think
Because...
To be perfectly honest,
I stopped caring.
A long time ago.

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  • Nail Bunny On Sunday, October 16, 2005, Nail Bunny (184) wrote:

    didn't we all, didn't we all... and yet, we still need the support and concieved love of others... (could have gone on a major rant) its a good piece of work...

  • AniDayz On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, AniDayz (1051) wrote:

    a-fucken-men. bravo.

  • Aethelwyne On Monday, October 10, 2005, Aethelwyne (54) wrote:

    Ah, well you know me, i gotta love all you do. So i compliment youi and your works......although you dont care lol

  • Astra Dei On Monday, October 10, 2005, Astra Dei (586) wrote:

    I think you could have done more with this. but it isnt bad

  • Jerrica On Saturday, October 8, 2005, Jerrica (106) wrote:

    Great write, I can see this in lyrical form. It would be a really kick ass song! *J*

  • vaultgrl On Wednesday, October 5, 2005, vaultgrl (211) wrote:

    so straight forward, "I stopped caring, A long time ago"....great write, and...so...just....well you get the idea :-)

  • MelvinOliverDrauma On Wednesday, October 5, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (496) wrote:

    its a good way to go

  • Adaml On Wednesday, October 5, 2005, Adaml (254) wrote:

    simple... i love it... it frames everything i tyr to not care about i dont sometimes but really i do so i can relate to it quite well


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