knowing you, like clubbing seals.

~ King_Crazy_Dave ~

I need a cage
I need
A class
On class or something

Or I will try to drink your
Mind
Find your seams and scream
Screams
In your library

To just know
How curves and folds
Fit lengths of bold
Blunt
and my motives sound like
sex scenes I know,

though

sometimes you chickens
need a cock

if I could make a living lifting legs
like a laced up hooker
I’d wrap my toes around stars
And crush them down into your drooling mouth

I cant though, so I map your cognition

Its painless,
I don’t let you feel it
I’m not malicious
Just fascinated.

I’m a hallway with locked doors
Swallowed keys
And a deck of cards.
You’ll never turn my tumblers
Or know if I hold the joker
Five of spades
Or a fist full of your brain

No compassion
Grinning wild and
Clubbing seals.

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On Friday, April 25, 2008, colorapathy (59) wrote:

This.. this i enjoyed very much.
A former member wrote: got me from the very start. wry humor and unexpected images.
On Monday, April 30, 2007, Endifference (213) wrote:

one gramm. error, fucking bit me in the ass the rest of the way. wicked write. -END
On Friday, April 27, 2007, capt_funguy (909) wrote:

" ...scream screams - in your library " excellent .. violate your sanctuary .. an understated perfect example of your city slang that only you speak - you've an altered view that is fascinating .. excellent .. funguy
On Friday, September 23, 2005, lostshadow (9) wrote:

Very detailed piece I like it a lot you are a very talented writer i enjot reading your work
On Thursday, September 22, 2005, SamoneDrone (348) wrote:

real smooth. i love the imagery and the entire concept of this. 6th stanza is exceptionally pleasing. .....-samone
On Wednesday, September 21, 2005, urbanhumility (1350) wrote:

fast, brilliant and smooth........well done...........urban
On Wednesday, September 21, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (423) wrote:

you are in a class of your own, dave. It's that "special" class they send those kids to who keep dribbling on themselves... even when they're in the ninth grade.
On Monday, September 19, 2005, suicideseason (1906) wrote:

Jesus Christ,man...organic poetry as it was meant to be enjoyed..."sometimes you chickens need a cock"...your writing is so "Fuck You"...I wish I had what you have.I can only pretend...and plot your assassination,of course...
On Monday, September 19, 2005, suicideseason (1906) wrote:

...I do not belong being mentioned in the same sentence as you...and commenting on your writing...for me anyway...It's like pissing on the spot where they hung the cross for Jesus...my words are a desecration to yours.
On Wednesday, September 21, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (423) wrote:

ha, tim, that's fucking awesome. Tell me where that spot is so i can piss there too.
On Tuesday, September 20, 2005, glasshouse (697) wrote:

They are.
On Monday, September 19, 2005, Astra Dei (586) wrote:

wow... this was very cool.
On Monday, September 19, 2005, Elegant Kiss (224) wrote:

.. "I’d wrap my toes around stars And crush them down into your drooling mouth"..
On Monday, September 19, 2005, Elegant Kiss (224) wrote:

..Dave.. You're the hoarse tragic wails of a thousand sunsets.. sinking, fist raised, mind clear into a yellow body of pure brilliant ocean. Bathed and beautiful. At random you make up all the words. Sun. Moon and sky.
A former member wrote: wow... this poem is fucking amazing, although judging by the previous comments, you already know that :)
On Monday, September 19, 2005, Evil (425) wrote:

you are a manipulator. almost genius. nice.
On Monday, September 19, 2005, sIo (793) wrote:

magnificence.