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Forgive... forget? by PoeticHellion
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Forgive... forget?

~ PoeticHellion ~

she.
runs to hide.
from her enemies.

she.
flies away.
to the land of no return.
where nothing matters.
where nothing ever ends.

soon.
she will be
lonely, but
not alone.

surrounded.
by love. by friends.
by stupidity.
by fear.

time.
slows down, changes pace.
forgives...
never forgets.

he.
waits.
for her...
to be his,
once more.

Copyright 2005 PoeticHellion
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  • A former member wrote: The guy is diabolical! And her, i don't know how to desrcribe, but combined this made it pretty good. not as much imagry as i like, but o well

  • ZealousValadiction On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, ZealousValadiction (52) wrote:

    This is realy good, I agree with serenity about the fav line. I realy like this write -laurie

  • MelvinOliverDrauma On Thursday, September 22, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (496) wrote:

    "surrounded. by love. by friends. by stupidity. by fear." this line rings true for me....the people I love are supporting my fragile existance and they don't even know it

  • Serenity On Monday, July 18, 2005, Serenity (528) wrote:

    I like this as well "time. slows down, changes pace. forgives... never forgets." Espeically that line.

  • A former member wrote: different, but well thought of concept... I like it

  • sIo On Monday, July 18, 2005, sIo (793) wrote:

    strangely enough i like this.


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