you, nothing.

Bloody noses ,roses
Poses
Ready for the camera
Action,
Be them
With acute
Perfection, afflict
Inflict
Cosign constrict
Act in fact
React with tact
buttons stutter
Shudder, fool
Just flinch
One inch
And watch us hit you
Break your jaw
We love

Shallow

Tighter denim
Curves
Venom
slide, wrap those
limbs
around
we love, lust

more

push back your smile
you’ll never use it
in this world
cold
black
blink
now don’t,
die on me
you
piece of meat
you
nothing

we love, luster

shine for me
its all
you’re worth

• On Sunday, July 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (423) wrote:
  
  you have an amazing grasp of rhythm Dave. It makes the words so much more tasty!
  
  
• A former member wrote: powerful, ouch... but at the same time... Psyched...
  
  
• On Tuesday, June 28, 2005, Elise (234) wrote:
  
  Wow, nicely written..that ending Ouch, you sure know how to use words as a weapon throughout this.
  
  
• A former member wrote: you are so talented!!!you are also very hott!; )- summer
  
  
• A former member wrote: Brilliant . . "shine for me its all you’re worth" . . these lines, perfect..
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, PaperPromises (65) wrote:
  
  Bitter and lovely.. -Cor
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, Evil (425) wrote:
  
  this is definately crazy, mean poetry. you've got this thing, baby, and it makes me want you. =)
  
  
• On Monday, June 20, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (752) wrote:
  
  I loved the flow of this...Brutal slap in the faceness...aaaand I'm saying what they said, so I'll shut up.
  
  
• On Monday, June 20, 2005, Liz (339) wrote:
  
  How do you do that?
  
  
• A former member wrote: great write, it has a nice flow.
  
  
• On Monday, June 20, 2005, Elegant Kiss (224) wrote:
  
  Brutal and rigid. The flow was superb as was the lingering power.
  
  
• On Monday, June 20, 2005, sIo (793) wrote:
  
  damn, like snorting pine needles and lotion...lubricated pain laced with forced desire. awesome.
  
  
• On Monday, June 20, 2005, suicideseason (1906) wrote:
  
  This is vicious and raw...the herky-jerky tone was a relentless whiplash nightmare...I can't get enough of writes of this magnitude.I should read more of you.
  
  
• A former member wrote: shine for me its all your worth, i bet thats how hugh hefner thinks about his models