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Rant of the mind inspired by young flesh (Mature content) by darkdesires
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Rant of the mind inspired by young flesh (Mature content)

~ darkdesires ~

WARNING: The following work is intended for readers that are 18+ and may contain material not suitable for everyone. Those readers who might be easily offended or upset by reading sexually deviant works I suggest not read my work.

Fuck it happened again. Why do I suffer this damn affliction day in and day out? It’s like a damn disease. Maybe I should start at the beginning, but well that’s just not my style. No, let’s start from when I saw her. We’ll take it from there and move along. You see… I’ve been watching her while we are together. See agrees to spend time with me and my eyes stay glued to her no matter what. It gets to the point I have to try and hide it and make it look like coincidence every time she notices me looking. I keep trying to tell myself its normal. When that fails I tell myself I would never act on it. Her young body taunts me though. It screams out to me with its developing curves and it seems overly abundance of innocence and temptation. Her body screamed for it his minded tries to justify. I didn’t want to really do it, but it just happened. Why would I do that? I’m not like that. I couldn’t stop myself. I knew she was only fifteen and I’ve even more aware that I myself am twenty. I don’t know what came over me. His mind knew that the ramifications it was making meant nothing really. He wanted to touch her, to kiss her soft tender lips, to feel her smooth skin graze over his own. Just to be close to that and to be inside of her. He wanted nothing more. In all truth he loved it. Feeling her willing strip her cloths off like a shell and then taking off his. He could barely contain himself when she first gripped his cock and slid her hand up and down moments before her lips wrapped around the tip of began to move up and down and the length, her hand still stroking what wasn’t in her mouth. He was so excited and filled with pleasure he nearly couldn’t stop himself from releasing has he was inserted into her mouth. She seemed so willing to throw it all away. To defile, degrade, and so willing to mutilate her innocence for him. So young… god he wanted to tear her to shreds in his bed while they made love. To hear he scream out in pain while he slammed in and out of her. Pounding her with his cock, each push inside of her causing a bizarre mix of pain and pleasure. He did do exactly that and more. He smiled and laughed has she cringed on the bed gasping and whimpering. “More” he screamed out in pleasure watching her under him. She eventually found pleasure in their sex. He became rougher with her. Holding her tighter and changing up his paces to keep her on edge. Seconds flew into minutes. Minutes passed into an hour and eventually the both found a climax that wore out their entire body. He fell on top of her still inside of her. A mixture of both of their cum flowing out of her and dripping down her side. He smiled at her and nuzzled her cheek and whispered “It was just like I dreamed”. She laid there still and quiet. She was dead. “I guess I was too rough with her” he chuckled.

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  • A former member wrote: I amdit that it was kinda of wierd that she died at the end,but it was hot,and I loved it!

  • flying_fox On Friday, November 17, 2006, flying_fox (716) wrote:

    wow... the ending really surprised me. This was a really gripping write, it really makes you feel like you're a cunning voyeur into someone else's thoughts.

  • Hello Dead Kitty On Saturday, April 22, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty (48) wrote:

    i need a cigarette

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, March 30, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:

    It made you grin ear to ear reading this taring at your mind making you feel two things at the same....;) I loved it mate

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, March 30, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:

    This was so fucking awesome it was yummy and fucked up at the same time just the way I liked it. The words just periced your heart and tore you away as you continued to read....This was masterful surpass you my ass!

  • elisa On Tuesday, March 28, 2006, elisa (1892) wrote:

    hmm..... i guess she wasn't much of a contender........leftovers are for pussies anyway... lol

  • snowdrop On Monday, February 27, 2006, snowdrop (2148) wrote:

    This was thrilling.. and I believe her age added that much more to the write because she became that much more desirable.. *smiles* It is almost ironic. Taking her virginity (an assumption on my part, based upon her initial pain), then taking her life..

  • snowdrop On Monday, February 27, 2006, snowdrop (2148) wrote:

    Well conveyed.. delicious.. I thoroughly enjoy this.. thank you.

  • A former member wrote: Naughty, Naughty!I loved it. You fucked her tell she died. He can't argue with that. good write...

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1057) wrote:

    hehe..dd..still so so smart :P this was excellent and pritty wild, i must have missed it in the past, forgive me ?

  • Sin On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, Sin (1406) wrote:

    wow i like it rough but damn... perhaps you should tone it done a little bit there beastie ;)

  • A former member wrote: wow, you fucked her soo hard, you killed her...what type of shit is that...i find a weird sense of humor in your poem...

  • Forgotten Angel On Sunday, March 20, 2005, Forgotten Angel (367) wrote:

    soo good..surprised me at the end tho..wow..good write! lol -Kel

  • Elise On Sunday, March 20, 2005, Elise (234) wrote:

    Omfg, so naughty..so so, wow it was vivid. I loved it, the ending made it so wow. I'm speechless.

  • A former member wrote: I loved it. Your such a good writer, i adored the part when he noticed she no longer lived anymore. very good indeed!


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