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a stolen virginity, heart-broken wrist-slitting poem about moons by Bast
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a stolen virginity, heart-broken wrist-slitting poem about moons

By Bast


this is about moons, and changing
and the tendancy of people
to become luna-ticks
sucking the blood of other people's pain
we all like to lick at other people's pain
especially when from wrists slit for our eyes
drama is what we live on, deny though you may
you know it's true.

this is about moons, and wondering
why in the pale light some things
are ok, and others are not
and who died to elect each of us god
why our changing seasons makes us
somehow able to compare and judge
the seasons of others.

this is about moons, and questioning
how one person's heart being broken
is more valid than another's
and quality of poetry, and why
our opinion on what is "good" and what is "bad"
expressions of that anguish, that despair
is the one true path, the only truth.




my virginity of spirit has been stolen
my heart broken by watching compassion
slit her wrists in my bathtub.

the moon watches the grisly scene.

she waxes and wanes
regardless.

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Copyright 2005 Bast
Published on Tuesday, February 22, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love this.

  • InsipidTouch On Friday, July 29, 2005, InsipidTouch (35)By person wrote:

    Beautiful

  • Delphoid-Q On Thursday, March 10, 2005, Delphoid-Q (225)By person wrote:

    Regardless... Seems that way, don't it?

  • BleedSilver On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, BleedSilver (312)By person wrote:

    You are wicked awesome. -nods-

  • Rain In The Willows On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Rain In The Willows (1102)By person wrote:

    I'm with Mikey Scholar

  • happilydepressed On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, happilydepressed (182)By person wrote:

    lol

  • A former member wrote: "and who died to elect each of us god" My point exactly. Clever retort or no it still all comes down to a matter of opinion where no one is right or wrong. But preach on, it's _everyone's_ right to do so. ~Ship!

  • Bast On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, Bast (780)By person wrote:

    and _everyone's_ right to feel strongly about things too, eh, ship?

  • A former member wrote: Absolutely :)

  • A former member wrote: LOL Bast you and I are too much alike ;)

  • Bast On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, Bast (780)By person wrote:

    wait a minute! i almost said that on YOURS! hehehe, j/k. muah!

  • stormtalk On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, stormtalk (754)By person wrote:

    slick title

  • DarkDruidess On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, DarkDruidess (363)By person wrote:

    intelligent retort...

  • ardneK On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, ardneK (78)By person wrote:

    awesome write my dear...beautiful retort - >|

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, Gideon Lost (144)By person wrote:

    Here, here. Let's slit them all.

  • Gideon Lost On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, Gideon Lost (144)By person wrote:

    Oh, and this was a wonderful write Basty

  • blue On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, blue (1514)By person wrote:

    Right on! I refrained from a comment on 'the other'. I usually don't pander to ignorance. *applause* encore. Much enjoyed poetic rebuttal! You rock! ~b

  • lordshadow On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, lordshadow (154)By person wrote:

    Now I'm ignorant... wow, not only am I being burned, but I'm being insulted too. Yay! You waste your time to insult me, but you couldn't express what DP means to you.

  • Metal Lullaby On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, Metal Lullaby (48)By person wrote:

    HAHAHA. Nice. Where is lordshadow...

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, The Crimson Queen (961)By person wrote:

    hahaha...i hope that lordshadow enjoys this one...

  • lordshadow On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, lordshadow (154)By person wrote:

    Wow... I'm the bad guy for once. I liked this piece. You retorted nicely. I'm glad I inspired you to write something. Enjoy being above and beyond the rest of us as you apparently are.

  • lordshadow On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, lordshadow (154)By person wrote:

    you still missed the point...

  • Bast On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Bast (780)By person wrote:

    no, no, lordy-pie- you missed the point. ::grin::


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