Manipulate

I’ll part your skin
Seep inside, grip
Lungs,
I’ll breathe your oxygen
Squeeze out your,
Parts.
Cough, let your flesh
Kiss me.
And I’m sorry,
Cause I have you
I will have you.

At my, feet.
Not to lift you,


And I’d love to,
But I have no, will
So forget about me
Cause I will have you,
Grip, heart,
I’ll breathe your kindness.

All you are,

Isn’t
Anymore.

• A former member wrote: i.....just.....wow this is good i like this its....dang i cant even explain it GREAT job really great
  
  
• On Monday, July 25, 2005, ApathysKiss (419) wrote:
  
  this was suffocating, i like how you've structured this...hyperventilating. ~michelle
  
  
• On Sunday, January 2, 2005, Liz (339) wrote:
  
  The commas are messing with me; I'm having a hard time reading it smoothly. Concept is executed with strength and originality.
  
  
• A former member wrote: wow good job
  
  
• On Monday, December 27, 2004, Anth (1437) wrote:
  
  superb work,felt a bit like lyrics,takes you right into it,great concept and orginality in your writing of that
  
  
• A former member wrote: great write from beginning to end.
  
  
• On Monday, December 27, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (752) wrote:
  
  you already know what I think of this, because you said it in every word you wrote...
  
  
• On Monday, December 27, 2004, Drifter (330) wrote:
  
  Nice work, like the ending.
  
  
• On Monday, December 27, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (498) wrote:
  
  intense, and the ending was great. . I really liked this a lot.. . a lot of truth in these words, and the honesty makes it really beautiful . nice work
  
  
• On Sunday, December 26, 2004, Drea (821) wrote:
  
  The title says it all. This was honest and dark. This kept my attention from beginning to end. Killer write, Dave.
  
  
• On Sunday, December 26, 2004, DoctorAsh (448) wrote:
  
  Very fire crackery dave .. a burst of splendidness - here, have my wallet. [D&A]
  
  
• On Sunday, December 26, 2004, Astra Dei (586) wrote:
  
  really dark and twisted. im totally in to this piece. awsome ending
  
  
• On Sunday, December 26, 2004, JiNx (123) wrote:
  
  That was beautiful! *agrees with suicide* -JiNx(ie)
  
  
• On Sunday, December 26, 2004, suicideseason (1906) wrote:
  
  Awesome piece.Gripping and intense.The ending is killer.