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Manipulate by King_Crazy_Dave
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Manipulate

~ King_Crazy_Dave ~

I’ll part your skin
Seep inside, grip
Lungs,
I’ll breathe your oxygen
Squeeze out your,
Parts.
Cough, let your flesh
Kiss me.
And I’m sorry,
Cause I have you
I will have you.

At my, feet.
Not to lift you,


And I’d love to,
But I have no, will
So forget about me
Cause I will have you,
Grip, heart,
I’ll breathe your kindness.

All you are,

Isn’t
Anymore.

Copyright 2004 King_Crazy_Dave
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  • A former member wrote: i.....just.....wow this is good i like this its....dang i cant even explain it GREAT job really great

  • ApathysKiss On Monday, July 25, 2005, ApathysKiss (419) wrote:

    this was suffocating, i like how you've structured this...hyperventilating. ~michelle

  • Liz On Sunday, January 2, 2005, Liz (339) wrote:

    The commas are messing with me; I'm having a hard time reading it smoothly. Concept is executed with strength and originality.

  • A former member wrote: wow good job

  • Anth On Monday, December 27, 2004, Anth (1437) wrote:

    superb work,felt a bit like lyrics,takes you right into it,great concept and orginality in your writing of that

  • A former member wrote: great write from beginning to end.

  • Malice In Wonderland On Monday, December 27, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (752) wrote:

    you already know what I think of this, because you said it in every word you wrote...

  • Drifter On Monday, December 27, 2004, Drifter (330) wrote:

    Nice work, like the ending.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Monday, December 27, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (498) wrote:

    intense, and the ending was great. . I really liked this a lot.. . a lot of truth in these words, and the honesty makes it really beautiful . nice work

  • Drea On Sunday, December 26, 2004, Drea (821) wrote:

    The title says it all. This was honest and dark. This kept my attention from beginning to end. Killer write, Dave.

  • DoctorAsh On Sunday, December 26, 2004, DoctorAsh (448) wrote:

    Very fire crackery dave .. a burst of splendidness - here, have my wallet. [D&A]

  • Astra Dei On Sunday, December 26, 2004, Astra Dei (586) wrote:

    really dark and twisted. im totally in to this piece. awsome ending

  • JiNx On Sunday, December 26, 2004, JiNx (123) wrote:

    That was beautiful! *agrees with suicide* -JiNx(ie)

  • suicideseason On Sunday, December 26, 2004, suicideseason (1906) wrote:

    Awesome piece.Gripping and intense.The ending is killer.


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