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thanks. by King_Crazy_Dave
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thanks.

~ King_Crazy_Dave ~

I thank the phone that rings when
I’d like it to
And the voice on the lines end
Whoever it is
And whatever they say , its not important
The fur of my best friend, as he wags and lights up
When I’m around
Even when I don’t need that
My ears for hearing, music
Any music, any
Friends, always pulling out the knives
You put there in the first place,
You have my deepest regard. Almost.
And the sun’s rays.
The cool wood floors that hold me
Even if I’m doing something
Undesirable.
And desire, driving my growth and my
Demise
I’d like to wryly smile, and thank all the ugly things
That make me feel, oh so
Beautiful.
And love, it is why I live
Say what you
Will
And I know you will
About
Love
I love it.
Lies that make the truth sweeter
Myself, for knowing to thank these things
Every day, not,
Just this one.
And this day, for giving one more reason
To piss and moan
About the things, I thank
To thank myself
For being better.
Finally, change
For keeping us
Aware.



>we killed the native americans. doesnt mean i cant thank something.

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  • Err0r On Sunday, July 29, 2007, Err0r (451) wrote:

    so I herd u liek thanksgiving? :O Rock those turkeys.

  • glasshouse On Thursday, December 2, 2004, glasshouse (697) wrote:

    Dave... you know how I feel about this one... but I felt the need to comment nonetheless. I could quote every single line and tell you how they all tugged my heart...

  • glasshouse On Thursday, December 2, 2004, glasshouse (697) wrote:

    I could write a million adjectives describing this piece and your talent but... setting aside all things superficial... this piece affected me. And thats what hits me hardest.

  • glasshouse On Thursday, December 2, 2004, glasshouse (697) wrote:

    Rarely do you find a piece that HONESTLY changes how you feel or what you think and you've done that for me with this piece. Simply amazing. *hugz* -Glass

  • WhoIAM On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, WhoIAM (31) wrote:

    great poem.

  • sIo On Sunday, November 28, 2004, sIo (793) wrote:

    you live for love...

  • Jane On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Jane (58) wrote:

    "Friends, always pulling out the knives You put there in the first place, You have my deepest regard. Almost." Holy hell Dave. You're so fucking amazing. It blows my mind.

  • Jane On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Jane (58) wrote:

    "I’d like to wryly smile, and thank all the ugly things That make me feel, oh so Beautiful." This is THE greatest line ever.

  • Demosthenes On Friday, November 26, 2004, Demosthenes (196) wrote:

    *smiles* its so happy when youre happy. you make me smile. again. in addition to that first one. i just might memorizethis for school (with your permission of course). -B

  • Malice In Wonderland On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (752) wrote:

    well said.

  • Savannah On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Savannah (278) wrote:

    very... Thanksgivingy-like

  • A former member wrote: awesome write.

  • JiNx On Thursday, November 25, 2004, JiNx (123) wrote:

    Wow Very intense write... nicely done.. -JiNx(ie)

  • A former member wrote: great write.

  • Six-Out On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Six-Out (1604) wrote:

    You forgot to thank me for something, bitch. I guess this could be seen as good though. ;)

  • BeautifulCalamity On Thursday, November 25, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (498) wrote:

    Just this one".. lovely work ..-calamity-

  • BeautifulCalamity On Thursday, November 25, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (498) wrote:

    i'm not sure of exactly what this made me feel, appreciation in the beginning but then I dunno.. a change.. great write dave, I liked the ending as well.."Lies that make the truth sweeter Myself, for knowing to thank these things Every day, not, Jus


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