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Memoir II by Tracer
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Memoir II

By Tracer

In My mind,
An agnostic decree
Bellowing a cryptic degree
of Uninhibited twinge

This state,
it bleeds my whole
This place,
my temple.

Ravines never flooded as much as my eyes.

The skies, never moved as much as my eyes.
As I lie awake, dreaming of a disposed cancer,
Those eyes pierce the overcast night.

Ravines never flooded as much as my eyes.

Your's cannot compare to mine.

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Copyright 2004 D. Corey Sanderson (Tracer)
Published on Tuesday, October 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • wonderland hysteria On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, wonderland hysteria (2835)By person wrote:

    ...it's like commiting emotional suicide...and all we wanted was to that share something sacred inside. Sickening, really...I feel for you. Lovely write.

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Six-Out (1513)By person wrote:

    And we wonder why we bother, eh? Sometimes the struggle for love isn't worth the heartache, this piece shows it. Honest pain. My heart bleeds tears for you.

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