Make me a Virgin Again

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The first thing I had noticed about her,
were her beautifully decorated eyes,
as she reached out towards me, with all of her mind.
Lifting me slowly up towards her,
with her emotions and surrealism's.
Pressing her soft lips, barely to mine.

As close as we were,
this was the closest Ive ever been to anyone before.
I could feel every positive moment in my life, intertwine.
Beneath her, the feelings I had for her rained,
across my desolate gardens,
replenishing everything in my life.

She slowly started to pull me in ... .
as her breath hit softly against time.
Her perfectly crafted hand, arranged itself,
against the center of my chest,
as she calmly leaned foreword and gave me a passionate kiss.
Her soft lips, slowly pulled away,
taking everything with them.
We unlocked eyes as I lead myself
gently down across the side of her neck.
While I closed my eyes, I breathed in .. .
Transforming, and becoming, our structure's combined ...

Unsaid feelings from heaven unburied themselves and entered.
All at the same time from every different direction,
in poured her whispering emotions.
Waves speaking of eternities and dreams,
knowledge's that defined the sanctuaries of love.
I opened up my eyes realizing that I ... .. .
had just touched god for the very first time.
But only for that one moment in time,
was when I knew everything about love,
before an overpowering sensation of creation sucked me within,
pulling me freely into the paths of the sky,
where everything was invisible except for us,
traveling through the calm winds that soothed in percussion's.
To a place where spectrum's of space and time,
have ceased in all moderation's,
and became only one lasting moment, of forever feeling love.



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More comments:

• On Wednesday, May 6, 2009, Foreverlost28 (26) wrote:
  
  This gives me hope for my first time. This was beautiful and couldnt have been written any better. Thankyou for showing me a different view about losing my virginity tho i still want to hold onto it for a little longer
  
  
• A former member wrote: Fucking sweet... No pun intended ;)
  
  
• On Saturday, February 14, 2009, thecitymorgue (11) wrote:
  
  great work
  
  
• On Monday, July 7, 2008, Dommi (109) wrote:
  
  this is still amazing
  
  
• On Monday, June 9, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (153) wrote:
  
  Ok I take back that its the first thing of yours I've ever read..... Hehe, But Still wonderful and befitting of you. And still I am going on to read more... again.
  
  
• On Monday, June 9, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (153) wrote:
  
  I do believe this is the most beautifully written poem about that one experience we can ever get back, that I have ever read. Being the first of your writes I have read, you have definatly hooked me into reading more. Congrats, and Good Luck to future writes, as I know they will be wonderful. -Heather-
  
  
• On Monday, June 9, 2008, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:
  
  You left me breathless ~
  
  
• On Tuesday, September 4, 2007, Circe Avalon (146) wrote:
  
  that was real. That comes from experience. You put it to words so perfectly.
  
  
• A former member wrote: this poet is amazeing on writing her poems i wish i was just as talented.......
  
  
• On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, diavolessa (250) wrote:
  
  i always liked your poetry a lot. this piece is a good examples of what i missed. be well
  
  
• On Wednesday, April 18, 2007, your_only_love (146) wrote:
  
  this is absolutely amazing and very well done... the images, the flow... beautiful
  
  
• A former member wrote: wow
  
  
• A former member wrote: enchanting, seducing, beautiful.
  
  
• A former member wrote: This is perhaps one of the greatest love poems I have ever read. Actually no, it is definitely one of the greatest I've ever read. ~April
  
  
• On Saturday, August 5, 2006, the dried flower (78) wrote:
  
  i loved this poem,,,,,,it made me think.
  
  
• On Monday, April 24, 2006, XxSinkingDarknessxX (9) wrote:
  
  good write
  
  
• On Thursday, April 20, 2006, mywristshurt (449) wrote:
  
  it feels like your floating away with all good feelings, doesn't it? great write, i really liked it
  
  
• On Thursday, April 20, 2006, Shadow Rapture (203) wrote:
  
  a kind of rare excursion into ther realms of fantasy via bodily secretations? what an unusual but excellent piece - bravo!
  
  
• On Friday, October 6, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:
  
  I second this guy!!!!
  
  
• A former member wrote: vary sexy and yet pretty at the same time. Love it. ~A Medicated Dreamer~