almost

By Bast

al
..
...
..
most

i see

your smile

lightly
touch

your
eyes

al
..
...
..
most

i feel your breath

-brief-

against my
skin

al
..
...
..
most

i reach
out

fingers

barely

touch

al
..
...
..
most

you leave me
in my
dreamscape

aching

leave me

al
..
...
..
most

almost

wanting

you

back

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Published on Sunday, May 30, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "almost"

On Thursday, September 9, 2004, cre (440) wrote:

This is so well-done that I swear I can hear you speaking it . . it leapt out at me so quietly and powerfully . . more of an experience than simply something read. I miss you.
On Friday, September 10, 2004, Bast (781) wrote:

cre, i miss you too. oh so much.
On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer (168) wrote:

wow this is an anazing write
On Sunday, May 30, 2004, wonderland hysteria (2486) wrote:

Oh god, Kitty...this is breathtaking...it's quivering with emotion, so lovely. *quickly adds to favorites*
On Sunday, May 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland (441) wrote:

w0w. . . this is wow...very intense i love this. i like how you set it up too ~ss

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