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Naked

~ finaldestiny ~

im standing right before your eyes
naked
my feelings and soul open to you
with nothing to
hide
the chassis within has been broken
free
take a look at me
and discover
i
am
me
hate me because I live the life
you aspire
although my mind may
conform
my heart and soul will not
I stand before you
naked
my essence is
bleeding
with emotion
that you cannot perceive
my wound is getting
deeper
and my pain more evident
tears
of blood run down
I grab a tissue
but blood continues
my hearts stops
to realize
you dont care
at least I
tried
but I must leave
to find another who will
undress
me.

Copyright 2004 finaldestiny
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  • kiss of the dark On Friday, June 16, 2006, kiss of the dark (38) wrote:

    you wear your heart on your sleeve...a spiritual and religious unwrapping of your feelings and emotions...so sad

  • Tracer On Monday, March 29, 2004, Tracer (133) wrote:

    Different take on not being cared for by someone whom you loved but did not return that feeling, "my essence is bleeding", great imagery...^vTracerv^

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, March 29, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (544) wrote:

    well put, i hope you find someone worthy to undress you


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