Sin and Tonic

By hate_doll

Black nails trace
Sinful indulgences
On to milky flesh
Waning numbness

Silky voice
Muttering memories
Into the depth of being
Isolating inhibitions

"take me"

Weaving desire
Into curls
Of cigarette smoke
Lingering on stale lips

Rendering temptation
From carnal wishes
Let this be the time
Resistance is wrong

"let me"

Velvet eyes
Seclude me
In the mists
Of feral breaths

Seeping underneath
Pleasant agression
Feeding the fire
To wanton movements

"Make me"

Dangerous trysts
Shrouded in mystery
Hung by lost purity
Entertained by passion

Angelic succubus
Sipping ripened lust
Heating livened desires
And seducing words

"Drink me"

...whytt*04

{I'uno...}

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Published on Wednesday, March 17, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Sin and Tonic"

A former member wrote: this was awsome. i loved it
On Thursday, January 25, 2007, Bella Butchery (808) wrote:

ok, yeah, you go on favs for sure...
On Wednesday, July 12, 2006, blackdarkness (250) wrote:

I stoped by to check on you love, and i am glad i did.....;)
On Monday, June 28, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (188) wrote:

as sensual and lulling as any opiate...great...(i know i commented before i felt the need to do so again)
On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, Blood of Winter (322) wrote:

Now Whytt, I would have to say this is the sexxxiest thing I have ever read...it's as if these words are a sensual hand running delicately erotic fingers the length of my mind
A former member wrote: not just any cigarette will do here, it must be a bong so i can get back to reading more. damn this is outstanding dear. well done, very well done
On Thursday, March 25, 2004, flying_fox (646) wrote:

this was sensual, sultry...seductive. All those great 's' words! *wooh* Think I need a cigarette now... Fox
On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Ravenblade (405) wrote:

Very seductive write, with great imagery...poems like these and the ones that remind me of my past are why I fell in love with your poetry...way to continue impressing me...
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lynaes (914) wrote:

Wow, very seductive, real and raw. I loved the flow and the wording, paints an extremely vivid picture. Awesome write. ~L
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, OLd SouL (867) wrote:

I need to find a bunny. :::OLd
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (114) wrote:

Ooh your back on your yummy seductive writing...Ah I love spring, I agree with nell. Hate, this is awesome, Id love someone I know to read this...rekindle memories...mmm x
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Mistress Morbid (485) wrote:

jesus fuckin h christ! This is so awesome....I could only dream of this....=) Morb
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, capt_funguy (842) wrote:

cool title , , and " in the mists of feral breaths" was fuckin' great .... has a spoken feel to it somehow .. like a breathy whisper ... loved it ... funguy
On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, nell (299) wrote:

ahh spring is definatly in the air with all these sensual poems being written, t'is the time to fuck like bunnies, this was so dark, deep and sexy, wicked write
On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (188) wrote:

ooo...i like it i like it..very sultry dim and is that a hint of decadence..?

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