eternitys sweltering sunbathe

sweltering suns rays
dry my bodies dew
moist...for you,
have cooled my shelter
for my...sol...
glistens illuminous
upon my shell
the water----life,
rolling droplets
d
o
w
n my back
tracing perfectly curved
shadows.s.s.s.silhouettes
of love, glow around our auras
in reflected beauty
upon the surface...masks...
but in the eyes exists the key
to eternity

• A former member wrote: that's a good one
  
  
• On Friday, May 6, 2005, Kinkypoptart (663) wrote:
  
  great write ~*~Tart~*~
  
  
• On Sunday, June 20, 2004, eternal despair (70) wrote:
  
  i really like the way that this was written, very enjoyable \m/
  
  
• On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, Solace (1273) wrote:
  
  "For my...sol..." lol i'll take this for a poem for me :) regardless of its original intent! I loved the imagery here so romantic and subdued, sleepily depicting a beautiful scene
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, OLd SouL (763) wrote:
  
  your style is unique and appreciated. The destination here is common but the path you took was plowed through a jungle. I enjoyed every bit. :::OLd