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eternitys sweltering sunbathe by GoldenLotus
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eternitys sweltering sunbathe

~ GoldenLotus ~

sweltering suns rays
dry my bodies dew
moist...for you,
have cooled my shelter
for my...sol...
glistens illuminous
upon my shell
the water----life,
rolling droplets
d
o
w
n my back
tracing perfectly curved
shadows.s.s.s.silhouettes
of love, glow around our auras
in reflected beauty
upon the surface...masks...
but in the eyes exists the key
to eternity

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  • A former member wrote: that's a good one

  • Kinkypoptart On Friday, May 6, 2005, Kinkypoptart (663) wrote:

    great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • eternal despair On Sunday, June 20, 2004, eternal despair (70) wrote:

    i really like the way that this was written, very enjoyable \m/

  • Solace On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, Solace (1273) wrote:

    "For my...sol..." lol i'll take this for a poem for me :) regardless of its original intent! I loved the imagery here so romantic and subdued, sleepily depicting a beautiful scene

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, OLd SouL (763) wrote:

    your style is unique and appreciated. The destination here is common but the path you took was plowed through a jungle. I enjoyed every bit. :::OLd


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