illicit ink

illicit ink draws from my pen
feelings from my soul
if only you could read me
my eyes would tell you all
my thoughts speak, without a word
screaming silently through breaths
a whisper is heard

illicit ink pours down my cheek
carrying with it oblivions sorrow
taking every memory of every moment with you
soon to dry away, forever left...the stain

• On Wednesday, September 5, 2007, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:
  
  we need you around more
  
  
• On Thursday, September 6, 2007, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:
  
  :) thanks for your kind comments.
  
  
• A former member wrote: wow...you kno, before i became a member the the wonderful dp, i had read this.i'm glad i found it again. GREAT write
  
  
• On Thursday, March 10, 2005, blue (1606) wrote:
  
  'screaming silently through breaths, a whisper is heard' this line surely got my attention. Wonderful write, it just melted down the page to a stinging conclusion. ~b
  
  
• A former member wrote: i just got goose bumps... ur work does that to me alot! there is such an "intense'ness" there, it draws u in...mwah
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:
  
  this strunk me down like lightning.. amazing write. illicit ink pours down my cheek carrying with it oblivions sorrow .. I am in awe. *bows before gothic*
  
  
• On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1055) wrote:
  
  'screaming silently through breaths' this line will ever be silkscratched in stained'ink across my poet's soul, gothbounded...
  
  
• On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Mr King (596) wrote:
  
  you've got 2 extraordinary pieces like this one regarding "ink" ... I think I'm gonna take a picture of my tatoo and post it today... again, whether ink hits the paper or flesh you struck a soulful cord with me...