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pink elephant by GoldenLotus
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pink elephant

~ GoldenLotus ~

painted
an image
on my eye lids
so i see
when i
close my
eyes
an amazing
masterpiece

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  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1512) wrote:

    Jonas said it, so did Carl. I to love this piece

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1512) wrote:

    wow I see I allready commented on this. Still. I love it

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, carlosjackal (1759) wrote:

    Short, sharp and loaded with different interpretations. Gorgeous. -Carl

  • Twilight On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, Twilight (1913) wrote:

    very thought-provoking...beautiful said as well..

  • Jonas On Monday, February 2, 2004, Jonas (811) wrote:

    beautiful! implications extending into so many beautiful possiblities with so few words!! lovely, absolutely lovely. some substances can open doors to interesting insights.

  • A former member wrote: hey... i like this its deep ~LEAH

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1512) wrote:

    this gave alot of thought.. I wonder if you wrote this about not seeing beauty in dearkness and youre dreams.. wonderful write. made me think for sure. :o) Monkey

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1512) wrote:

    seriusly if you were on acid.. the no wonder the tittle is pink elephant and the story/stile was like a dreamstate.. hehe.. I like it lots.. :o) Monkey

  • Bakkhus Unbound On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1043) wrote:

    'an amazing masterpiece', like an abstract painting, this composed poem; i can feel the paints dripping from the brush behind your subconcious eyes...

  • Raven On Monday, January 19, 2004, Raven (332) wrote:

    So short, and yet, a refreshingly concise piece... Nicely done..._Raven
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