pink elephant

painted
an image
on my eye lids
so i see
when i
close my
eyes
an amazing
masterpiece

• On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1562) wrote:
  
  Jonas said it, so did Carl. I to love this piece
  
  
• On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1562) wrote:
  
  wow I see I allready commented on this. Still. I love it
  
  
• On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, carlosjackal (1804) wrote:
  
  Short, sharp and loaded with different interpretations. Gorgeous. -Carl
  
  
• On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, Twilight (1964) wrote:
  
  very thought-provoking...beautiful said as well..
  
  
• On Monday, February 2, 2004, Jonas (870) wrote:
  
  beautiful! implications extending into so many beautiful possiblities with so few words!! lovely, absolutely lovely. some substances can open doors to interesting insights.
  
  
• A former member wrote: hey... i like this its deep ~LEAH
  
  
• On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1562) wrote:
  
  this gave alot of thought.. I wonder if you wrote this about not seeing beauty in dearkness and youre dreams.. wonderful write. made me think for sure. :o) Monkey
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, GoldenLotus (39) wrote:
  
  ty, for the comments, but i actually wrote this piece several years ago, tripping on acid...lost and abandoned with the silence and unstillness of my imagination...i am grateful that anyone could like my work...GoTHiCPiXie
  
  
• On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1562) wrote:
  
  seriusly if you were on acid.. the no wonder the tittle is pink elephant and the story/stile was like a dreamstate.. hehe.. I like it lots.. :o) Monkey
  
  
• On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1056) wrote:
  
  'an amazing masterpiece', like an abstract painting, this composed poem; i can feel the paints dripping from the brush behind your subconcious eyes...
  
  
• On Monday, January 19, 2004, Raven (338) wrote:
  
  So short, and yet, a refreshingly concise piece... Nicely done..._Raven