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~*I hear dead children call my name*~ by Crying_Banshee
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~*I hear dead children call my name*~

~ Crying_Banshee ~

I hear dead children call my name
"No one was there,
when daddy played that dirty game
No one was there"

I hear dead children cry out loud
"We were archangels
But we fell from the highest cloud,
we were archangels"

I hear dead children cut their arms
"No one was there
To keep us away and safe from harm
No one was there"

I hear them, in daylight and in my sleep,
The abused children.
I hear them,from their grave they'll always weep,
The abused children.

I hear dead children sing to me,
Their lyrics are filled with sadness,
I hear their hurtful melody,
Each note if filled with pain.

I hear dead children call my name,
"No one was there,
To dry our tears and wipe our shame,
And we wonder

Why were WE here, to recieve the hits,
We had no shell against the fists,
We just had our illusions, and our skin
To cut to let out this pain within.

We did dream of the light, in vain,
We just had our tears and life to drain,
Alas! Death was clement, and welcomed us,
Alas! For we had no one else to trust."

~*The Mutilated Archangel*~

Copyright 2004 Crying_Banshee
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  • A former member wrote: this is amazing. i almost cried. my god that is sad.

  • A former member wrote: wicked...nice and sad.

  • A former member wrote: wicked.......

  • A former member wrote: last stanza is nice. i wish the rest could get more concrete with some imagery. keep ploding.

  • Simply Me On Saturday, September 4, 2004, Simply Me (46) wrote:

    I lived this life and do still through nightmates, anxiety attacks and everytime I see my scars... This poem means alot to me. It's written perfectly and I love all of it. Thanks for sharing it.

  • aXe FactoR On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, aXe FactoR (395) wrote:

    heartbreaking piece. i like it, its full of pain & truth at the same time. -MeL-

  • A former member wrote: this is so true and to think it really happens. A beautiful piece of work.

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Friday, January 23, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (76) wrote:

    it really gets to me that so many children have to go through this. and this piece gives me shivers every time i read it. wonderful write, it really gets the point across.

  • AlluringDescent_darkbride On Sunday, January 11, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (698) wrote:

    I wanna cry now. So sad...but so true. Damnit...and I can't stop reading it. Excellently written.

  • Anybody_Killette On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Anybody_Killette (48) wrote:

    ... Very Nice

  • Drifter On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Drifter (330) wrote:

    Sad... and this is the world we live with... nice write.

  • Drifter On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Drifter (330) wrote:

    heh, like the pic

  • Velvet_Raventon On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Velvet_Raventon (654) wrote:

    Ahhh I still can't believe that my sister is such a wonderful writer... VGood again, as always dear. Velvet.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:

    Twisted.. I agree totaly with "The duck" and i must say that the powergothgirl pic rule.. monkey

  • Typhon On Sunday, January 11, 2004, Typhon (9) wrote:

    I wish I could say I liked this, because it is well written, but it's hard to actually like something so sad. It pains to know that things like this happen...so again, wonderfully written, tragically true. Good job.

  • A former member wrote: *agrees*


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