To All The Fucking Heroes

could you fix a porcelain heart
and heal a broken soul?
could you mend a thousand scars
make this life seem a little less old?

could you kiss away the tears
and never tell anyone else?
could you make me dream in colour
and save me from myself?

cos wounds will heal
and scars will fade
but i still feel them
and they don't go away
bruises are hidden
and mirrors can lie
pretty plastic image
but it's all fake in my eyes

could you take a shattered life
and make it something new?
could you take a dying heart
and hold it close to you?

could you feel this perfect anger
and be there when i cry?
could you take me by the hand
and bring me back to life?

i only ask
because i'm afraid
and there's nothing there
to get me through today
i'm only screaming
to try make you see
past the pretty plastic image
this is the real me

i only ask
cos i'm so fucking afraid
and i can't find a thing
to help me through today...

More comments:

• A former member wrote: the ending... that's what i'm feeling now...
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (331) wrote:
  
  keep coming back to this one; its so damn good i don't know how to comment though...like anything i say would take away from it. but ty for sharing it; i need it. ~pf
  
  
• A former member wrote: that was very good, i'm kind of critical when it comes to poetry since i love it so much. and that was really fuckin good, it sounds a lot like a reflection of myself, even my poetry. i love it.
  
  
• On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx (248) wrote:
  
  rubbing it in my face and there's nothing they can do to save me. ~lauren~
  
  
• On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx (248) wrote:
  
  love it love it love it...we're studying hero lit. in school right now, beowolf and such, and all i keep thinking is "SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!" that's great, that they killed monsters and all, but they could stop rubbing it in my face and there's nothing they
  
  
• On Friday, February 3, 2006, dying angel (1076) wrote:
  
  "could you make me dream in colour".....*screams*..i literally just did. *fav*. great, omg i cant even tell you how awesome this is. damn it you struck a nerve i feel like i need to hit something
  
  
• On Saturday, April 2, 2005, so_skeevy (69) wrote:
  
  wow, i love it.
  
  
• A former member wrote: That is.. the color of pure black. Pain without exceptions. Wonderful.
  
  
• On Friday, September 10, 2004, DarkWolf (419) wrote:
  
  A wonderful, pain-filled work. Cold with the feeling of truth. Fantastic job. -Michael
  
  
• On Saturday, September 4, 2004, Simply Me (46) wrote:
  
  Bravo! Awesome write, loved it from start to finish.
  
  
• A former member wrote: "i'm only screaming to try make you see past the pretty plastic image this is the real me" amazing! everything about this pome is soo tuching
  
  
• On Saturday, July 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:
  
  nah dude.. but I can grow class and save your silly ass from the sentinals .. err.. got carryed away there for awhile . loved the poem. nice start and finish
  
  
• On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Storm (169) wrote:
  
  Perfect. The whole. Jikes this was a good write!
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Starfilled Starburst Starless (15) wrote:
  
  i love this poem... you wrote this beautifully... the opening line is awesome and its still great thru the end :-) -star
  
  
• On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, physicalgraffiti (61) wrote:
  
  jaw-opening...genius. i loved this. great write
  
  
• On Sunday, January 4, 2004, Drifter (330) wrote:
  
  Badass! This is wonderful, great work!
  
  
• On Friday, January 2, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (359) wrote:
  
  Great write..."pretty plastic image but its all fake to me" I love that line...this is going on my favs!!!!
  
  
• On Thursday, January 1, 2004, Tracer (133) wrote:
  
  The whole entire piece flowed, I especially liked "could you feel this perfect anger, and be there when i cry?"...very emotional...^vTracerv^
  
  
• On Thursday, January 1, 2004, Suicidal Tendencies (25) wrote:
  
  wow, hard to find words to describe it. I agree with all of the above!
  
  
• On Thursday, January 1, 2004, TornPaperDoll (71) wrote:
  
  "To all the fucking heroes" perfect! TPD