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For A Friend(First Tear) by SilentStalker
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For A Friend(First Tear)

~ SilentStalker ~

I dare to say I love you
To tell you that I care
That if something is hurting you
One call and I'll be there

But everything I offer
Is it just not enough
To keep you from hurting yourself
Or doing crazy stuff?

You cut yourself that morning
And then today again
I cannot fathom how someone
Could do those things my friend

This isn't healthy for me
And surely not for you
I wonder each and every day
What you're about to do

I offered myself to you
And look at what was done
First time in years I'm brought to tears
Worried about someone

I wish that I could help you
But don't know where to start
In every aspect of our lives
We're only worlds apart

But still I will not falter
I'll always feel the same
For now I'll do all that I can
To help you ease your pain

I may not understand it
But that will matter not
I may not have enough to give
But I'll give all I've got

Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
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  • kaiyailee On Monday, February 25, 2013, kaiyailee (76) wrote:

    so beautiful

     
  • DarkDruidess On Friday, January 28, 2011, DarkDruidess (319) wrote:

    Brutally refreshing to see the other side of it...thanks a million...need just this sort of bump...*bows deeply*

     
  • A former member wrote: i have read this about four times now. i never commented, ionno why...maybe it just hit too close to home...this was expressed wonderfully even tho it was full of pain...but i guess that's what makes it great too..cuz it's real

     
  • Emptyness Inside Me On Thursday, January 13, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (177) wrote:

    very deep, excellent write, you place your words beautifully darun, expecially when there from the heart, everyone in the world needs a friend like you, great job ~Emptyness~ ~Josh~

     
  • Drifter On Sunday, January 4, 2004, Drifter (297) wrote:

    This is really a beautiful sentiment to someone... can't wait to read the next 2

     
  • morbiddemonchild On Saturday, January 3, 2004, morbiddemonchild (33) wrote:

    Darun, I figure this poem is for me. I have no words. I cannot say enough that this means a lot to me. Thank You.

     
  • SilentStalker On Saturday, January 3, 2004, SilentStalker (1201) wrote:

    ...I think you take the record of my longest letter ever written to someone, and the first person I never met to bring me to tears...nicely done...if I had door prizes, you'd be getting one... -Darun Scholar

     
  • morbiddemonchild On Sunday, January 4, 2004, morbiddemonchild (33) wrote:

    no prize!? damn!

     
  • A former member wrote: Cutting is no good. makes me sad. good write.._-=Evil=-_

     
  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Wednesday, December 31, 2003, Jaded Jezzabelle (344) wrote:

    I think this is anything but rough...the honesty this was written with comes through so clearly...your rhymes are on hit...me thinks this is a master piece be proud of this tear for it is beautiful and true

     
  • Delilah On Wednesday, December 31, 2003, Delilah (117) wrote:

    Agreeing with Ophelia on this one...I thought this was very deep, and emotional, my heart goes out to you and I hope it works out for the best...~Delilah~

     
  • Ophelia On Tuesday, December 30, 2003, Ophelia (257) wrote:

    *sighs* not enough words can say what you said here.............O.

     

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