Somebody Break Her

Break her please,
Tear her apart,
Crush that sad,
Aching heart.
Take that film,
Off her eyes,
Stuff her mouth,
With tasty lies.
Then let her scream,
As loud as she can.
Raise up an army,
Strike up the band.
Peel off the band-aids,
That cover the pain.
Leave her outside,
In the pouring rain.
Take the stitches
From her mouth,
I’m asking you nicely;
She wants to get out.
Somebody break her,
Somebody please.
There’s a little girl dying,
Inside of me.

• On Wednesday, April 15, 2009, lovechild (43) wrote:
  
  i know how this feels and it is like a disconnection with the best part of yourself
  
  
• On Friday, April 7, 2006, dp_whipping_girl (331) wrote:
  
  haunting beyond diction; quite a spellbinding write.
  
  
• A former member wrote: sad and beautiful
  
  
• On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Sticky Kitty (284) wrote:
  
  haunting and pleasing -kitty
  
  
• On Friday, December 31, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:
  
  Wonderfull .... Seamed so real
  
  
• On Monday, September 6, 2004, Choronzon (219) wrote:
  
  I love your poetry. This is so sad. Such a great write.
  
  
• A former member wrote: i really love this! i think everyone has felt this way before..awesome job dude!
  
  
• A former member wrote: awesome...this is one of my favorites..
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Twilight (1917) wrote:
  
  total wowness. whoa...this was pretty heavy duty. the title made my stomach drop. incredibly dark, unforgettable. this one will be on my mind.
  
  
• On Thursday, April 8, 2004, OLd SouL (763) wrote:
  
  awesome, awesome work. In a sense.. this was perfect. *shrugs* I don't know what else to say. :::OLd
  
  
• On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (186) wrote:
  
  *stunned* such a powerful and aming poem, great job, going into my favorites ~Emptyness~
  
  
• On Monday, February 16, 2004, physicalgraffiti (61) wrote:
  
  if i can feel it i love it. This one i can feel in every inch of my body. Stunning
  
  
• A former member wrote: im speechless, nice write.
  
  
• On Monday, December 29, 2003, Daemonicus (610) wrote:
  
  :O im reading... she is an enemy? maybe... but I read on and the last four lines... :O she is you. gee ill have to read more of yours
  
  
• On Thursday, December 25, 2003, Tracer (133) wrote:
  
  such anguish in this write...I felt every word...^vTracerv^
  
  
• On Thursday, December 25, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1055) wrote:
  
  'Take that film, Off her eyes, Stuff her mouth, With tasty lies.' we all have that nine inch nail deep inside of us, it's our sins crucified; sometimes they surface & fcuk w/ us;comfort your hurt, love it, it'll turn around and kiss you back.the lit
  
  
• On Thursday, December 25, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1055) wrote:
  
  the little girl will then kick some ass! Leave the pouring rain outside.. .
  
  
• On Thursday, December 25, 2003, suicideseason (1906) wrote:
  
  my god...you write with so much feeling.and twice as much pain.you make me feel what you feel.very nice flow,too.all around,an excellent work.~season
  
  
• A former member wrote: i can totally identify with this one torn...it wrenches my heart...good write