E'er Entombed

~ Tracer ~

A cold winter's night
Only our final breaths can be seen
The hallucinations becoming stronger
As death looms overhead
Trapped in disaster's wake
For what sins are we being punished?

The fire died hours ago
Final embers covered by ice and snow
As daylight breaks; startling realizations
All hope lost with south bound fowl
The now dimly lit cabin holds no pity
Windows providing no light

Gray becomes all envisionment
A day's struggle results in fatigue
The grandeur that was once our life
Forever entombed, waiting for rediscovery
Maybe those who finally see will mourn,
Two frozen, hand-in-hand, for all eternity

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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, aXe FactoR (368) wrote:

a very catchy title, and even intriguing piece of work. you really know how to assemble each and every word to fit this into a flawless poem. nicely done. :)
On Friday, March 12, 2004, Lynaes (914) wrote:

So raw and gripping, excellent work, beautiful. ~L
On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, WinterGrave (282) wrote:

i couldent think of a better way to die then with my love's hand in mine, beautiful display of sadnes.~~~Grave
On Tuesday, December 30, 2003, Sky Singer (168) wrote:

i liked the story in this... very real... like a haunting memory... or dream... ::sighs:: regardless, excellent work
On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, Sky Singer (168) wrote:

...i read it again, and i know why i like this so much :) beyond it being a well written poem, it reminds of an Iced Earth song -- "Last December." again, this is a wonderfuk poem you've penned.

E'er Entombed

~ Tracer ~

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