I Still Remember

i still remember
when you said you'd be there forever
and i still remember
when they told me you were gone
and i still remember
seeing all those cuts and bruises
and i still remember
long ago when there were none

and i still remember
when you'd smile and life was perfect
and i still remember
when my whole existance was you
and i still remember
when you told me you wished you were dead
and i still remember
when you made that wish come true

and i still remember
when you'd say not to wreck my eyeliner
and i still remember
when it ran with all the tears
and i still remember
when you weren't there to stop them
and i still remember
me wishing that you were still here

and i still remember
how much it hurt you to smile
and i still remember
how you'd kiss away the pain
and i still remember
when you ran out of kisses
and i still remember
everything fading to grey

and i still remember
when you promised me you'd be there
and i still remember
but i guess that i dont care
and i still remember
when perfection turned to a wreck
and i still remember
but i think i'd sooner forget...


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• A former member wrote: Wow man that was very very good!!!
  
  
• On Friday, May 19, 2006, empty_remains (84) wrote:
  
  this was perfect, thank you so much for sharing you pain in a beautiful way. i haven't cried over a poem in a long time. your words are beautiful..
  
  
• On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Sin (1406) wrote:
  
  tragic yet lovely in its pain...
  
  
• On Monday, October 24, 2005, GothicBlack (230) wrote:
  
  this is heartwrenching. I could feel my heart breaking with the sorrow in this poem. It's an emotional poem. ~gothic~
  
  
• A former member wrote: that was nice, I liked the form and the flow, but most of all the emotion, great.
  
  
• A former member wrote: That is bloody awsome mate, really is!! i give it a 9/10!! :)
  
  
• A former member wrote: incredible
  
  
• On Thursday, December 9, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (75) wrote:
  
  I loved it, it flows wonderfully. def going on faves---steph
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 2, 2004, aXe FactoR (395) wrote:
  
  a very sad lingering feel to it... nice write. :)
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Beautiful Scars (221) wrote:
  
  defintly going on my favorites
  
  
• On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, Beautiful Scars (221) wrote:
  
  Wow, I loved this..its so sad..
  
  
• On Saturday, May 8, 2004, Drea (821) wrote:
  
  this made me cry. the emotion and the overwhelming feeling of sorrow. very well done.
  
  
• A former member wrote: wow that is so sad.. :-\ hm this made me cry.. uhm i really like the way you wrote this. =)
  
  
• On Saturday, January 17, 2004, Typhon (9) wrote:
  
  I feel you on this. So, so much.
  
  
• On Saturday, January 17, 2004, DeathSentance (19) wrote:
  
  OMG that is totally amazing...I want to cry...that is going on my favorites list
  
  
• On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Wantusi (43) wrote:
  
  Pretty good...
  
  
• On Thursday, November 6, 2003, GothicBlack (230) wrote:
  
  Theres so much emotion in here, i wonder if there's some truth to this. At any rate, how sad... but yet still beautiful. i likes. ~gothic~
  
  
• On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Rebel_Angel (376) wrote:
  
  I really like this too! I think it is great.
  
  
• A former member wrote: this si a really good write, i like the story, and it flows with your words