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Summer 2002 [Bad Trip?] by xX pretty vacant Xx
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Summer 2002 [Bad Trip?]

~ xX pretty vacant Xx ~

broken
bleeding
shaking
stealing
innocent
whore
less
or more?
pills
and screaming
only
dreaming?
only
joking
laughing
choking
breathing
crying
believing?
lying
lost?
confused
cherished?
abused
chemicals
trust
love
or lust?
tears
streaming
unknown
leading
least
i'm feeling
broken
bleeding

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  • BeautifulCalamity On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (498) wrote:

    i liked the flow to this, the questioning in some place, but the sureness in others. . loved the way it ended as well

  • A former member wrote: love it

  • yslehc On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, yslehc (369) wrote:

    ooo lovely

  • Wantusi On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Wantusi (43) wrote:

    i love it. Simple in some ways..Unbelievably complicated in others..

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1550) wrote:

    sweet.. by the way I forgot the nexB dnce can you show me? thanks :o) monkey

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (76) wrote:

    yeah it kinda goes *wiggles ass and flails arms around*. but obviously it looks better when theres a group of us.

  • Deliverence On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Deliverence (688) wrote:

    I like the way it descends via the use of the apporopriate words.-Kefka

  • A former member wrote: it seems that i am not the only lost here,but i have a question, all that that happened in summer 2002 and keeps goin on? very good work!

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Thursday, November 6, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (76) wrote:

    umm okay i'm kinda dumb and i don't get the question... *hides*

  • Wantusi On Thursday, November 20, 2003, Wantusi (43) wrote:

    Don't feel dumb...because if you're dumb for not knowing what that question meant..then i must be as well.. Re-phrase that question Hate if you will?

  • Drifter On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Drifter (330) wrote:

    Damn, i like it. Franticly seeking a reason for your pain. love works like this and this ones very good.


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