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I Was a Poet by The Nick
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I Was a Poet

By The Nick

 Ink stains have become our blood stains
When the pen becomes more violent than machine gun fire
I was a poet
I goosestep language to do what my heart says
To emancipate emotions I didn't know I had
I was a poet
But now, I've evolved beyond it
Theraputic wordsmith, I reconcile your realities
Literary blacksmith, my words are no longer figments for you to ponder
I was a poet
I could write a verse to take the sun away
Leave you in an abyss to slowly decay
I was a poet
Able to pen a love so rare, you'd think it was only yours
I can reinvent your fairy tales or I can douse them in kerosene
I was a poet...once

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Copyright 2012 Nick Yuk
Published on Saturday, March 24, 2012.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is a random write for a line that was stuck in my head. It's a rough draft so feel free to be critical of it
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  • revlis On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, revlis (155) wrote:

    this is awesome, i love the depth in it

     
  • terris crimson On Saturday, March 24, 2012, terris crimson (232) wrote:

    this is definately unique. well done ^^

     
  • dwells On Saturday, March 24, 2012, dwells (6308) wrote:

    "than machinegun fire" comparative case. Also, "words no longer figments for you to ponder" this line tripped me up because isn't that what poetry really is? I think you mean to say that you don't need somebody's critique maybe, because now you have risen above all that perhaps? That being said - this was great as is, and it surely seems finished to me, unless you'd care to tweak it a bit. Much enjoyed and I'm usually not so critical but you sound like a good sort and did ask for it. Hoping I was helpful? Cheers!

     
  • The Nick On Saturday, March 24, 2012, The Nick (18) wrote:

    Thank you very much. You are right definitely wrong tense. As for the "figments to ponder" part, the idea was that I'm creating realities, thus my words are concrete not just ideas. Once again thank you

     
  • dwells On Saturday, March 24, 2012, dwells (6308) wrote:

    Appreciate the clarification, I can see that too, thanks N.

     
  • With love_Crow On Saturday, March 24, 2012, With love_Crow (198) wrote:

    This was awesome. Rough draft or not it flowed beautifully and the metaphors and figurative language used was epic. Bookmark!

     
  • veingo On Saturday, March 24, 2012, veingo (603) wrote:

    That's how most of my writes begin too. I think it stands very well as it is. Welcome to the vally... ^V^

     

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