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Commitment by Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3
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Commitment

By Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3

The Devil gleams at her DarK King..
Hold steady.. Are you ready.. For me.
I wana lay you down and show you my fear..
Let you taste the SiCkNeSS.. Bled from my tears..
Your so beautiful.. In me..


My flesh coils
as the nightmare serenades
enter me and claim me for spoils
a treasure dressed in blood
anointed a victim offered
to the kingdom of lunacy
as the mistress of the moon
spreads her enigmatic drugs
weaved in her milky light... I kneel


Rize for me sire.. This night breeds a fire..
Flamed in desire.. I covet you..
A love I cannot handle.. Dismantle me...
As I show you the need.. Feed my disease..
I'm still hungry...


In thirst you have been kept
and in lust you will be swept
so faithfully you render...
a spirit romance
Threading spells out of time
and giving breath to the organs entrance
open hand summons the fog
you won't be left untouched
the enigma possesses and keeps you
like a boxed in god...


My King.. I have been taken...
As I bow in serender.. I render me hazed

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Copyright 2012 Wr1tt3n V3ng3anc3
Published on Wednesday, February 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is a Piece tailored by Devilish and I...And She is to be bowed to and ovated to for her start of the web I simply just jumped in.
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  • Im All Alone On Monday, March 5, 2012, Im All Alone (130) wrote:

    I was home when my momma wrote this with you. dis the shit. she say you the best.

     
  • haunted On Thursday, February 23, 2012, haunted (2022) wrote:

    this is fantastic. i love the blashphemous deeds that you two commit. its mends in perfect harmony and the dark thats presented is so romantic. it seems devilishes roll is being corrupted in such a beautiful tasteful way. bravo devil!! there is not not one peice of this poem that made me go limp! excellent poem you two!

     
  • Devilish On Thursday, February 23, 2012, Devilish (4938) wrote:

    I don't wana look or seem arrogant.. But I fucking love this so much. I'm so serious.. It is flawless. And truly i'm appreciative of the ones that have commented .. I'm honored.. Scholar

     
  • Envia On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, Envia (308) wrote:

    Excellent, you two. Just excellent.

     
  • dwells On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, dwells (6351) wrote:

    This may inspire me to write something about "God in a box", no promises, and much enjoyed the collab, thanks - to two of the best!

     
  • Chaos God On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, Chaos God (676) wrote:

    Delectable. Bravo!

     
  • Devilish On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, Devilish (4938) wrote:

    Wow im honored sir thank you.. so much... Scholar

     

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