A Sun Now Set

By Crimson_Lover

I opened my eyes,
Wishing to speak to my
Long lost friend. 

My eyes welled...
   My heart tugged...
      My throat tightened. 

You were gone. 

I closed my eyes,
Wishing you had enough 
Love to last.

You decided now...
    You went away...
         You are missed.

I miss you. 

Watching the sun set,
I think of you and
Try to breathe. 

Yes... You were meaningful
Here... Not only to me but to

We miss you... At least,
I do. 

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Copyright 2012 Crimson_Lover
Published on Saturday, February 11, 2012.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

For TyrantAvDetForbannet... who tonight I realized was gone. I miss you! ):
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  • Meggerz On Monday, November 26, 2012, Meggerz (102)By person wrote:

    I have felt this many times...

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, August 2, 2012, TyrantAvDetForbannet (367)By person wrote:

    Thank you, this was truly heartfelt. words could not come to sense how great this makes me feel. \\m/ ave crimson

  • Crimson_Lover On Sunday, September 2, 2012, Crimson_Lover (335)By person wrote:

    Thank you, Ty.

  • DeathDarknessDespair On Friday, February 17, 2012, DeathDarknessDespair (21)By person wrote:

    aww he will love this. Great tribute!

  • FadedBlues On Monday, February 13, 2012, FadedBlues (3240)By person wrote:

    ...this is very heartfelt...we hope that wherever he is, he finds this...

  • Magdalena On Sunday, February 12, 2012, Magdalena (1004)By person wrote:

    Nicely penned and wonderful sentiment.

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