Forgive and Regret

~ Banshee ~

I believed all your lies, untrue love takes its toll

You broke me inside, and toyed with my soul.

Incapable of love, your weapon is lust

Your beauty's a mask, underneath is disgust.

You tore me down, and took what was left

Jaded are you, for committing this theft.

I let you back in, a mistake on my part

I trusted my eyes, instead of my heart.

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Another unfinished work :\

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On Sunday, January 1, 2012, LifeIsComplicatedPainIsSImple (97) wrote:

Short and to the point, l like the flow as well as the idea. Eyes can be decieving and l can relate to this all too well. Excellent work
On Thursday, December 29, 2011, dwells (6263) wrote:

This is quite finished I do believe and very well done. Sounds like somebody was a one night stand and then relegated to the dustbin of history. Been there once long ago - just remember the memories and awakenings, thanks.
On Thursday, December 29, 2011, Banshee (39) wrote:

Uhm, thanks.
On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, Banshee (39) wrote:

Yup, trust no one. Thnx tas... do you mind if I call u tas?
On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, ComeLittleLeaves (16) wrote:

I love the last two lines! Our eyes can deceive us and cause us to be blinded to the truth inside our hearts. Nicely written and a lovely read :)
On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, Banshee (39) wrote:

The eyes are very powerful! Im glad you enjoyed it.
On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, With love_Crow (198) wrote:

The idea that "even the most beautiful of things are corrupted" really shines through in this piece. The betryal and underlining depth of pain can be sensed. Nicely done.
On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, serenesavage91 (70) wrote:

very nice, i like it, it has a good flow. Short and awesome :) welcome to DP
On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, Banshee (39) wrote:

Thank you!

Forgive and Regret

~ Banshee ~

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