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Leaving You by Gray Vision
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Leaving You

By Gray Vision

Say no more,
I've had my share,
Of all the lies,
You've told this year.
You mean so much to me
But it hurts to see,
All the hurtful things,
You've said and done
To me.
Why can't this work,
Why can't we be?
Our bodies are here,
But our minds are astray.
What good are we here,
If we just don’t care?
I really don’t know
But we're still here.
I mean,
Isn't that enough,
To show that we still care?
No stop right there,
This isn't fair,
So I'm leaving before
You cause any more
Harm,
My dear.

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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Monday, April 26, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Feel free to comment or pitch any surfacing ideas, thoughts or advice, tyvm.
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  • Skye On Monday, May 21, 2012, Skye (239) wrote:

    I feel like you've struck a chord inside me with this one. Beautifully written and structured, it was a wonderful read.

     
  • A former member wrote: Deep. I can tell this took a lot out of you. Well done. =)

     
  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (544) wrote:

    KS you changed your pic! This rose is wonderful but it doesn't do justice to your beautiful face. I hope all is well, lets talk again soon =)

     
  • A Life Without You On Monday, April 26, 2010, A Life Without You (218) wrote:

    excellent, written in a classical sense, nice write

     
  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (544) wrote:

    Thank you very much my friend, you take care now =)

     

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